vipal
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Posted : Jun 18, 2011 01:58
good track, i would say its finished but maybe others see space for more fills. the melody at 2:00 is very melodic and bit out of style compared to the rest. you want this?
http://soundcloud.com/vipal
Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Jun 18, 2011 02:26
nice stuff! i like the part from 6min and up.. crazy!
your melodie thing at 2min is cool, i like the idea, but it could need more crisp to it - distortion, reverb, other delay. I donno you do what u want great track!
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Jun 18, 2011 09:37
Very good track bro but as Wizack Twizack already said theres more elements/Effects you can add in and i also say you can bring more softly atmos/Mello pads in Up there in the background then you will work on both sides of the track The emotional And the rhythmical And you will get more harmony of tools + More space in , Then your track will be sound more cinematic , Grand , Real and here .
We want fly highyer .. (The "basis" - 90%) - Of technique and sound exist Now we want the rest 10% To feel ..
Cheers ..
Icaro
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Posted : Jun 21, 2011 00:44
Nice track! Actually, I really love all the tracks I've heard from you.
At 2:55 there's a synth that comes in that I would like to hear a bit more dry and 'in-your-face', this sound doesn't last long, but stands out IMO.
The vocal clip that comes in after that, I've heard before....... but I guess that's ok.
Around 3:45, the synth I was talking about comes back in, and still I would like it a bit dryer, and more 'in-front' of the mix. This is just my opinion though. The part that comes next, is my favorite part of the song.
6:16 the sound I'd like dryer comes back in again. I'd really like to hear it a bit more up-front without much reverb.....
These are just thoughts though..... overall, I love this track!
sAt0ri
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Posted : Jun 22, 2011 00:59
Thanks guys! I got a new version almost ready, just a few minor adjustments. Your comments helped a lot!
will post in a few days
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Satori
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