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Elohel Exohex
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Posted : Nov 19, 2012 20:04:36
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Hi guys,
I'm new to the site but my name is Thomas Cooper and I'm a producer from Pittsburgh, PA. I'm excited to hear what you guys think about my stuff, as well as hear what everyone else is doing! Let me know if you have any critiques or songs you think I should check out. Otherwise I'll just peruse around on my own.
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Elohel Exohex
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Posted : Nov 19, 2012 20:05
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Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 20, 2012 02:27
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Hi Thomas, welcome! I like your sound, thought the snare is a bit to present / loud for my taste. Other then that great tune! Also i think some samples, maybe female vocals would fit in as well. Cheers
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Elohel Exohex
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Posted : Nov 20, 2012 17:50
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Thanks man! I just listened to Intergalactic Hyperspace and now I see why you made the snare comment, you keep your snare quite low! I agree my snare is possibly a bit too loud but I also suppose a bit of that is due to our difference in style haha. I really like how your music matches your name, it certainly sounds pretty galactic. Its really cool and unique man! However, I did find myself wishing something else happened in the song...I can't put my finger on it but I guess I just felt like it flowed really well but never really PROGRESSED into anything new and special. Obviously a lot of this is personal creative choice and I have no idea what you were going for but that's just how I felt as a listener. Overall keep up the good work tho man! |
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Nov 21, 2012 10:33
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Hello man and welcome!.
Snare sounds is completely out of proportions, you really have to mix that better. It stands out very much. I have to lower my volume cause it kinds of kills my ears.
I think you could work little more on the progression and transition in between things.
Anyhow nice track.
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Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 22, 2012 02:51
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On 2012-11-20 17:50, Elohel Exohex wrote:
Thanks man! I just listened to Intergalactic Hyperspace and now I see why you made the snare comment, you keep your snare quite low! I agree my snare is possibly a bit too loud but I also suppose a bit of that is due to our difference in style haha. I really like how your music matches your name, it certainly sounds pretty galactic. Its really cool and unique man! However, I did find myself wishing something else happened in the song...I can't put my finger on it but I guess I just felt like it flowed really well but never really PROGRESSED into anything new and special. Obviously a lot of this is personal creative choice and I have no idea what you were going for but that's just how I felt as a listener. Overall keep up the good work tho man!
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Thanks Thomas for your nice feedback to my track. Though it gets a bit messy to discuss my track in your topic  Just to let you know i uploaded a new version (with a slightly louder snare) Cheeers
The track discussion for Intergalactic Hyperspace is here http://forum.isratrance.com/testing-my-new-track-138bpm-space-prog/
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Nov 22, 2012 09:59
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+3000
You know , Was a big argument/Discussion About one of the best artist's of the century - Prince ! When he took and put his snare in the front (Out of mix) of his songs But 'In the end of the day' Prince create/Dictate a new style (Out of the normal musical build/Substructure - When that is normal too When you are prince And/So you have already proven music out) .
But here is not the case .. And sure theres need alot of work in here when this is all sound naked & virginal .
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