COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 15:41:05
hi guys, heres a short sample of a track im working on. what do you think. i now its not mixed down properly and its not mastered or anything.
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 16:21
i like the beat and flow easy to dance too, but i think that the distorted sound thingie that starts right at the beginning could need some more work, it comes from nowhere and doesnt really do that much to the track itself, it sounds a more off than 'right' if you know what i mean
keep rockin!
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 16:24
hi thanks for the listen, do you mean the sound right at the start or the sound that comes in around 30 secs ?
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 16:29
hey man,
yeah i agree the sound that comes in right away, it pans around and is like a flickering white noise or something. maybe try EQing it or turning it down a bit to make it sit a bit in the background.
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 16:30
it starts right at the start and keeps going all the way through, cant really say what it is about it that bothers me tho, think it kinda jumps out of the mix or something, im not so good at givin technical advice sry
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 18:40
thanks guys. i kinda like the sound, but i know what you are saying, so i will work on it. i loose perspective of the mix when i listen to a loop over and over again. thanks again
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 19:08
yeah man it is definetly hard to keep the mix in perspective when listening to it looped. best to take breaks. I think you can keep the sound in there, maybe just in a differnt part of the mix, lower to one side, idk, experiment.
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 19:15
You can boost the volume of the lead a bit that comes in at 0:42.
Nice work man
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 20, 2011 20:06
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On 2011-12-20 19:15, Icetoon wrote:
You can boost the volume of the lead a bit that comes in at 0:42.
Nice work man
thank you. iv been moveing the volume fader up and down all morning on that lead ha ha. the problem is that i used to have a lovely studio room and i had intentions of sound treating it and everything......now iv been told its going to be a nursery and is currently filling up with nappies and baby clothes. so i dont really get much chance to use my studio monitors much. thanks for listening and commenting guys.
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Posted : Dec 21, 2011 00:08
updated edit
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Posted : Dec 21, 2011 00:40
easy to dance too, but i think that the distorted sound thingie that starts right at the beginning could need some more work, it comes from nowhere and doesnt really do that much to the track itself, it sounds a more off than 'right' if you know what i mean 
and is currently filling up with nappies and baby clothes. so i dont really get much chance to use my studio monitors much. thanks for listening and commenting guys. 