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Rough Draught on new song... dark & melodic | Comments please!
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Fragletrollet
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Posted : Apr 1, 2005 02:51
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jaramogi
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Posted : Apr 1, 2005 19:29
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hey dude,
really nice ideas - a very industrial melancholic mood, i like this one but i think you need some percussion work on this one... try to use also some wushes.... in the background
man you'r on a good good way!!!! keep it up
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..::Sc!zOpHrEn!kZ::..
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Posted : Apr 1, 2005 20:36
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Hey
i like that track, but of course, You have to make percussion kinda better... and more dynamics in second half.
This track have nice, long beginning, which is something like a journey into sound, thats what i like, but the track should develop like i said.
Anyways its nice idea and i believe it will be nice one if You make some fixes etc...
If You have some questions or something feel free to ask me - MSN: Dark_Life_Records@hotmail.com ; ICQ: 257676076.
Wish You good luck 
BoOm!
 KiLLER.iNSTiNCT project
Dark Life Records |
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Fragletrollet
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Posted : Apr 1, 2005 20:53
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Thanks alot guys! Its really helpful to get feedback on your projects.
I agree that it needs alot more work, especially on its setup/dynamics. I'm going to Prague tomorrow, so I wont have time to work on it before I come back next week.
So Jaramogi, hows life? Got to work on that track of yours? |
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Psyberpunk
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Posted : Apr 2, 2005 00:34
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i like the general ambiance .. nice job...
and the first bass line is woooaw :o)
but yes missing some drum to dynamize the track |
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Hayez
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Posted : Apr 2, 2005 02:35
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this one is special, good work. the atmosphere is very well build. yes, it needs more work, but not too much. I realy would like to hear some twist in the end, like somthing that will help you to connect it with another track.
"a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913 |
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Fragletrollet
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Posted : Apr 2, 2005 10:55
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Thanks for all your kind words!  |
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zero_sun
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Posted : Apr 4, 2005 18:00
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for home project is very good,i say only Work,Work and Work... |
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