vipal
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Posted : Nov 29, 2011 07:38:22
sketch was 50% finished when i could still use my monitors, last 50% done on cheap headphones in an audio2dj soundcard while traveling, not sure about many things soundwise, i hear a strange rumble on soundcloud that i did not hear on my phones. anyhow hope someone likes it.
http://soundcloud.com/vipal
Pinkadelic @ ciledakniP
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Posted : Nov 30, 2011 03:38
ok, i can't really hear right now, but just to let you know, the bass has that rumble. but since you did it on cheap headphones, i'm guessing you want an opinion song structure, and not on sound. so i'll listen to it better later!
-Soultech/Stampgevaar Records, Parampara Recs
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Posted : Nov 30, 2011 18:49
ok, the clap just came in. i think the sample itself is too weak to fit the song. you might wanna verb it a little bit to add some space and size to it. i'd use a different sample though, that sample sounds like a demo sample..
I dug that ambiental pad in the background, but i'd use some variation. i've been listening for a whole minute now and all i hear is that pad with the kickbass.
You might wanna try some minibreaks to introduce or subtract sounds, might make their absence or new sounds more impacting. ok, on about 1:50, the bass gets deafening, there's absolutely too much bass. you might wanna get a meter to eq your stuff.
Again, now the closed hats come in, but its too sudden, theres no surprise, theres no introduction, it's all out of the blue.
Ok, final words:
there's absolutely too much sub on the bass, eq it.
the clap itself sounds too weak, it doesn't add anything to your track, and it actually takes away what's already there.
the hats sample and sound is good, but you introduce it too suddenly, there's no surprise, theres no drive. try getting more drive into your song with FX, breaks, minibreaks, buildups, silences and all kind of interesting stuff like panning or delays. don't keep it monotonic. Also, you're making Fullon psy, go wild! use 50 different sounds, just randomize them over your track, sync them to your beat, and just get to eqing them to fit your song. if something sound good but it doesn't fit the vibe, EQ it, Compress it, Verb it, do whatever u have to do, but don't just leave it like that.
Hope i helped!
-Soultech/Stampgevaar Records, Parampara Recs
