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Rhythm Planet - Welcome to trinity (146 bpm)

smoker
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Posted : Sep 1, 2013 02:50:42
working on new track guy's what do you think about this style
how it's sound ?
any tip will be great



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Grevinsky
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Posted : Sep 1, 2013 13:02
Hey dude.
It sounds like you have a reverb on your master?.
Or perhaps its just on the base, it sounds a bit weird to me. Like its lying in the back.
The baseline becomes a bit repetitive, if you want to make it that bouncy maybe you should develop a bit more.
Especially after 2.30 to get the feeling: this is developing towards something.

Try to work more on the progression, now its not really building. Some more sounds would be nice too           .
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knocz
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Posted : Sep 1, 2013 17:36
Hi! The mix seems a little off on this, as some elements seem too loud (the initial fuzz lead and the drum kit), and the kick and bass should be bigger / more up front.

Nevertheless, my answer is just based on the "conventional", and if you're trying to go with something new and different, then go for it.

Also, I agree with Grevinsky, at 2:30 is could easily build into another bassline, with a different groove One way to produce it would be keep the bassline at 2:30, but make the initial bassline with just one note, and gradually introduce the grooves notes until the 2:30 section (could also be curious if you only introduce a couple of notes, making the full bassline even more dramatic when it comes in).

A couple of rhythm synths in there (think about the main leads in "Boom Shankar") could be the bomb!

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smoker
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Posted : Sep 1, 2013 17:54
wow Ty very much guys
i only week up and i see the baseline problem
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It sounds like you have a reverb on your master?.



yes i try to mastering this track and make something total different and now my track sound crap


Ty very much again guy's for all advise           -------------------------------------------------
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