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Grevinsky
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Grevinsky
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Grevinsky
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 10, 2014 15:01
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knocz
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Posted : Apr 10, 2014 22:43
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On 2014-04-10 15:01, Grevinsky wrote:
Feedback would be very appreciated!
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I think the K+B is too compressed, making the bass loose power  But it could be my system, just changed a few thing today and it might not be quite right 
Ten, IMO the remaining sounds are a little lost behind the beat, maybe they were already HP a little high, maybe you could increase the volume a bit and it will fit in wonderful, maybe some general EQ (fix it at the source as much as possible)
Perc side, I think it's lacking a bit of open HH's on the off beat, giving the track a little more of a rhythm and feel.
Regarding the composition and songs structure, it seems the tune is missing a climax or a major tension release, like it's intended to go somewhere. from 6:10 on wards I'd really like it to rip apart and open, and to bring out your version / touch of the original tune (which I haven't listened to), as the tune until this part seems to be driving he listener into something bigger, something more, a reason of existence!
But, it's getting killer  Keep it up, good and great stuff is already there now make it take just one more step and blow our minds!
Keep it up
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 10, 2014 23:03
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hey man.. cool production.. at 2.00 it dives in neat.. in the transition near 2.10 that squelch kinda synth is a bit off on the last trigger.. it kinda kills the flow i think.. nice spacey reverb.. flow cool.. 6.10 is nice sounds.. cool work.. i would have added more layers some parts.. maybe thts taste..
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 10, 2014 23:40
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Thanks alot for the honest oppinions!.
Will definantly consider them.
About k n B being bit to compressed i think its the mastering ive made, gtta spend time more time on that.
Yeah had some serious trouble to get some samples to fit.
Ill try to fix it in the final mixdown.
Good point about no major climax at 6.10, maybe i build it more from there and release it hard.
thanks alot for the feedback, very appreciated.
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knocz
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Posted : Apr 11, 2014 19:56
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On 2014-04-10 23:40, Grevinsky wrote:
About k n B being bit to compressed i think its the mastering ive made, gtta spend time more time on that.
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Bad move -> not good to master your own stuff!
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On 2014-04-10 23:40, Grevinsky wrote:
Yeah had some serious trouble to get some samples to fit.
Ill try to fix it in the final mixdown.
Good point about no major climax at 6.10, maybe i build it more from there and release it hard.
thanks alot for the feedback, very appreciated.
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No, thank you for the tune, and the opportunity to help!
Now I'm listening on my AKG's, and the kick+bass is better Sorry for my wrong input, the best you can do is listen to it yourself in a proper listening environment and make your own decisions about this.
One trick you can do with samples, since you don't have the original synth to make it different, is feed the sound into a long delay (or delay with a lot of feedback) and mangle with the dub delay, ultimately making it blend into something else  Bounce that back to audio, glitch it up a bit, and you can get a really trippy modulating effect
But still, IMO at 6.10 the tune should change, as the tune has a lot of potential for tension to be created and released I'd love to hear the tune go low, that lead that's playing continue on playing and screaming, and something else coming in and taking control of the tune
Nevertheless, the tune is great and well produced - and apart of my personal opinions about my own tastes, it's well produced. Again, please keep it up and share more of these!
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 15, 2014 17:57
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Yeah i know you shouldent master your own stuff. But it give you alot more opportunity with live sets. Im free to do as i want, cause i can just render it over and over.
Thanks for the feedback and the tips, i look over it. Will work on it today! .
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