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Really needed some feedback .141bpm fullon -just for u to know what u gonna listen :P

Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 6, 2006 21:05
hey alienauts of all sorts, just finished this one and really enjoyed some feedback .
Anything goes,good,bad , give it all

the link:

http://www.beatbiz.net/player.php?tid=1157&ARTIST=Nomad Moon&USERID=600
Fubalone
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Posted : Nov 6, 2006 22:24
couldn t reach ur link!!

plz fix it!!
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positive control
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Posted : Nov 7, 2006 10:08
aint bad,but not perfect...

some frequencies are a bit annoying
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 7, 2006 12:20
hey there , thanx for your time this a new link:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=4637368&q=hi

@positive control:
thanx bro ,but can u tell me the wheres and whens of the anoying freqs,i work with crappy speakers so u understand it's hard to get the whole picture
Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Nov 7, 2006 19:40
I didnt like that starting offpitch melody, its a little bit annoying for me. I would work a bit more on the bass itself. from 1:50 it starts getting better, imo you need more drumlooops and it will be even better. i would continue a bit more till the next stop with that beat cuz its kinda nice. nice sounds in 3:30, i liked those . i liked all til the melody which starts in around 5:00, try to make something less cheesy and you will have a good buildup! the rest is nice too except that woman in the end
cheers
Chambao
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Posted : Nov 8, 2006 05:52
Man...
everything is bad till it gets to minute 1:48.
the starting melody is very aggravating.
the sample itself is hurting my ears each time i hear it.
the windy pad in the background is a nice touch but you overused it.
the bass in the intro also isnt fitting.
the kicks in the first buildup is a nice, but lazy tune.
but then, when u take out the annoying intro harp melody, it gets nice.
very proggy type. liked it very much.
the buildup after the silence isnt all that either, but the vox sample is well placed though i would expect mind blowing soundz after that phrase.
overall bro, ur song is a kickass dancefloor track, just work a bit on the intro, which has no place with this great song.
nice going bro
oh and sound surgeon`s right, the woman in the end is just plain annoying.
liked the buildup near the end 4:30
i like cheesy melodies
BooM
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 8, 2006 12:54
Finally some honest and good reviews thank u my friends! , i don't make them myself cos has i said i have some crappy speakers
I agree with almost everything mainly with the intro but i was playing with the Slayer and it sounded like Metallica and i liked hehe ,in the end i started to dislike it ,so i'll take it out and do another intro.
As for the cheesy in it , i went to Boom this year and it had a tight schedule after 12 o´clock it started to slow down so i kinda imagine a song for that period of 40º degrees,and i like Fatali so...
@Sound Surgeon:
Loved that review u made of S-Cube's Awakening ,very complete.
So,thanx for some of the more enlighted review i got overhere
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Nov 9, 2006 14:12
Following the advices of my good friends Sound Surgeon and Chambao made a few improvements like changing the beggining and takin that annoying female voice hope it feels better.its still cheesy though hehe!

http://www.beatbiz.net/player.php?tid=1157&ARTIST=Nomad Moon&USERID=600
odd sequence
Odd Sequence

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Posted : Nov 12, 2006 15:59
i agree with the others comments
thera are nice ideas and happy moods that i like
you have to focus on the 'sound production' part.
you have the spirit for better trackS!
GO 4 IT
;o)           Odd Sequence
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