Grevinsky
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Posted : Jun 2, 2012 17:01:53
Hello people.
I am producing a new track and would like some criticism and comments on it.
Its not finished yet, still have some things here and there too fix. But the general idea is there.
I have some doubts here and there.
supergroover
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Posted : Jun 2, 2012 18:28
Hi there grevinsky. The bass sounds quite thin here.. So maybe work a little longer on the bass sound.
The snare is also quite loud. Maybe pull it back a bit.
Apart from those I think you have a nice track going.
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Jun 2, 2012 19:00
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On 2012-06-02 18:28, supergroover wrote:
Hi there grevinsky. The bass sounds quite thin here.. So maybe work a little longer on the bass sound.
The snare is also quite loud. Maybe pull it back a bit.
Apart from those I think you have a nice track going.
Thank you for the comments, yeah i not completely satisfied with the base. I will work on it abit.
I look in to the loud snare also, been hearing this song for 10 hours in a row so im very used to the levels by now .
http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species
minus
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Posted : Jun 2, 2012 22:10
pretty decent work mate, liked the edning part the best, there r lots of things to improve in, more percussion work,ur percussin r too basic, u should make more compex patternz , it will help the sounds flow better, , some nice atmospherics etcetc.. nice work with voice sample, also you got nice concept to make the flow going on, bass can have better bounce by adding 1-2 bassnote changes ,, like 1 octave up down ,, in the middle just to get bounce interesting,,, ilike the way u change the bass up and downevery 4 bars or so, u should accompany other sounds also with them, so the groove gets going,also dont overuse same bass over and over, some small changes in middle will make it fresher, otherwise pretty decent work mate, keep at it,bomz
Grevinsky
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Posted : Jun 4, 2012 16:59
Thank you for the comment minus, i took ure advice with more interactive drum loops and bass patterns.
Made some changes to make the first part in the song more interessting.
