Razorblade - Pandorum (dark full power 146 bpm)(Work In Progress)
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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 14:25:09
Soo.... I've been working on this track for some time.. it's not finished yet but I'd like to hear some opinions and suggestions :]
_$k#pt!
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Posted : Oct 5, 2010 09:59
hi there...
u got something going there...
needs some tuning maybe...
*i don't know what daw you are using but if u have a db meter on your voulume fader on your indeviduale channels , try to make sure all your sounds and precussions are set about 2-3 db lower then your kik&bass..
e.g. i usually have my kik&bass playing at -7db and everything else at about -10db
*low cut everything that's playing at the same time with kik&bass up to about 150hz or higer...
i am bringing these tips up cause som of your sounds feel to loud for me and th kik and bass kind of gets swollowed by the rest of the stuff..
*lead coming in at 2:20 or so is preety bad imo... take the time to learn to syntisize a cool fat one.. planty of video tutriols on the subject..
hope i was any help at all..
Taii
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 19:06
hi. i think i agree with _$k#pt!
except that lead at 2:20 sounds average to me, not too bad, but i can imagine it better also 3:20 and the first part i enjoyed most:)
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