Whoa dude, that editing with the voice at the intro was really cool. And the white noise perc is cool also. But I think you should turn down his voice when you stutter him, cause it gets kinda loud, same thing with the kickdrum, turn it down a bit when you do those fast rolls.
Actually this whole track could use some good mixing, that reverse cymbal is way too loud and is not good. Eq the high end out a bit and turn it down, then you'll be all good.
This is gonna be tricky for you, but try to go back and listen to all the sounds and try to find the right levels for each thing, also eq sounds so they blend with each other. Take a listen to other tracks and how they sound, some sounds are not meant to be loud.
Scenix
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Posted : Jul 8, 2010 12:25
Break at 4:04 have to get fixed. and think u have to remove some bass from sounds and bass. because u cant almost not hear the kick or the bass in the track. track is good. just that you have to fix more with eq's
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L66
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Posted : Jul 8, 2010 14:18
very nice but like the others mentioned, your leads sit way too loud and so do the effects and crashes etc, your baseline and kick almost get drowned in the mix and the track loses "pumpyness" and drive.
otherwise good track!
cheers.
nevarakka
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Posted : Jul 8, 2010 16:55
If this track was really good mixed it would ROCK!. But i can almost hear that you are working on regular cheap computer speakers. But all you need now is time to build up your skills on mixing. buy GOOD monitors and you will blossom!
