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Rave of Light Version 2.0 - Kills the first one!! Listen!!
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shiv-e
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Posted : Aug 22, 2004 13:46
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Hello,
as promised..this is the 2nd version.. much better than the first i must say..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/shivemusic.htm
Go ahead and start the criticism people.
Btw, the track has not yet been mastered.
Thanx.!!
  Audialize - Starship Earth (TERCD003) Worldwide Release on 20th October, 2006!
VA - POWER (TERCD004) to follow soon after!
Stay Tuned for the Madness in store...! |
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illusions
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Posted : Aug 22, 2004 14:28
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wow, what an improvement.
just downloaded the mp3 - love the distorted flutes in the beginning - i woulda have let those go on through the breakdown.
drum rolls, breakdowns are very well done. nice bassline changes.
the second lead that comes in at 5:31 clashes with the the first one thats already been playing. some eq work would sort that out easily though.
overall a great track. keep up the good work !
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jaintasy
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Posted : Aug 22, 2004 14:42
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Great job buddy,
i get the power and i grind my teeth |
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shiv-e
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Posted : Aug 22, 2004 15:03
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illusions - thanx man... but i dont understand wat distorted flutes r u talkin abt ?? maybe if u mention the time i will understand...
ya i know the second lead at 5.31 needs to be changed.. i though so myslef.. but then again i liked the way it gelled wit the other...
jaintasy - 
Audialize - Starship Earth (TERCD003) Worldwide Release on 20th October, 2006!
VA - POWER (TERCD004) to follow soon after!
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--=psynikill=--
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Posted : Sep 3, 2004 18:22
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Ola!
Hopefully this post wont be deleted 
Track is great......like the flow....
I feel that there could be more of a "STORY/Journey" incorporated into the track so that it can take u to a higher plane...
Keep it up
!~BooM~!
--=music is more than mathematics & I am much more than a program with musical sub-routines=-- |
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orange
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Posted : Sep 4, 2004 00:12
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Zeyon
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Posted : Sep 4, 2004 00:12
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You really know what you're doing.
I don't like the rhytm of the bass, but I guess that's just me.
Kick and bass sounds very good in the depth. You surely have some good EQ-skills.
Like others said, your breaks are very good!
2:42 REALLY great part!
You are good at building up an atmosphere. 5:04 really good melodic part. I love the way you change the tones into lower tones. Sounds pro.
Well, the overall bassdrive fits to the track, but it's still not my style.
I haven't mentioned your intro and outro, they're also pretty good.
The Structure of the track is really good, the sound and quality is very nice. As others say, you've got a good chance of a contract. |
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shiv-e
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Posted : Sep 4, 2004 12:02
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psynikill: thanks man.. maybe v can make a track sometime.. like ur style.. hard and full power
orange: i still need to master it so maybe then u will find it better  but thanx anyways (i know its hard to like something not your style and im glad u like mine)
zeyon: the melody at 5.04 is a special one for me
as i said to orange its hard to like something not your style so im glad u do.
thank u all for taking time to listen and critic my tune.
will definitely give ul more to hear soon
boom!
Audialize - Starship Earth (TERCD003) Worldwide Release on 20th October, 2006!
VA - POWER (TERCD004) to follow soon after!
Stay Tuned for the Madness in store...! |
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shiv-e
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Posted : Sep 8, 2004 12:25
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Come on ppl.. I need your reviews on this one.
Really matters to me and helps me in future production!!
boom!!
Audialize - Starship Earth (TERCD003) Worldwide Release on 20th October, 2006!
VA - POWER (TERCD004) to follow soon after!
Stay Tuned for the Madness in store...! |
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PsyGoatDelic
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Posted : Sep 8, 2004 12:47
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cool intro man i liked those fx alot!
the bassline is not my style(full on).. but atleast its variating and this is quit nice! the percs r great! also liked the leads! and u know for sure to put interest in this track! good structure dude! liked the effect u putted on the bass line from 4:30! and then the break..... simplly good!
over all i think its a good production! u surlly know what u r doing and what u want to do... i liked ur funkey sounds!! but only add some more sfx 
keep up that great work!
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shiv-e
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Posted : Sep 9, 2004 01:05
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hey psygoatdelic, thanx for the words man.
Glad u liked the tune
Audialize - Starship Earth (TERCD003) Worldwide Release on 20th October, 2006!
VA - POWER (TERCD004) to follow soon after!
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*Karma Cola*
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Posted : Sep 9, 2004 22:24
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hello Shiv E
I liked ur track..thast says a lot i guess. With the amount of music one hears nowadays its hard to keep track. And i remembered urs. Thats important. 
ok..well here's what i thought abt it.
A. The flute sequence is nice. But try and keep it simple. Leave the bass out for lil while and how abt tryin to stretch the flute. A lil melancholy!!???
B. zeyon mentioned the EQ. U have madd skillz with them.
C. I like ur beat. its given it some depth.The break in the end of the 1st min especially.
D. around the beginning of the 3rd min it does sound a lil cluttered.
E. The melody in the later 4th minute is superb. defintely adds a lil twist to the track. but the pick up needs a lil more spice. Like a pause, revers kick another pause ..etc..
All in all..i quite like it.
Keep it up 
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shiv-e
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Posted : Sep 10, 2004 12:16
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karma cola :
thanx.. really was happy to read what u wrote in the beggining of the post
abt A, i have no idea wat flute ur talkin abt. Maybe if u tell me the min i might be able to rectify it. Because someone else had mentioned something abt flutes and i cannot recall using flutes in the track.
For the rest all i can say is thank u
Audialize - Starship Earth (TERCD003) Worldwide Release on 20th October, 2006!
VA - POWER (TERCD004) to follow soon after!
Stay Tuned for the Madness in store...! |
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askazi
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Posted : Sep 10, 2004 17:02
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Great work......
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katam
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Posted : Sep 12, 2004 09:00
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Its a really good track, really good eq but id correct some melodies that dont quite work with the bass....(im not talking about the last melodie)....anyway really good ending , keep it up ! |
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