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rübe (solo project) - Blasphemy

rübe und luki


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Posted : Aug 17, 2005 14:17
hi!

well, I'm not completley new into music, but this is my first track in this genere.. Therefore I would enjoy your feedback; does it work? does it sound ok? do you like it? Or should I go back to kindergarten?

Here we go:

- Webpage: http://non.sense.ch/?psy
- Stream (m3u): http://non.sense.ch/mymelods/m3u.php?cd=PSY01&track=050817.mp3
- Download (mp3): http://non.sense.ch/mymelods/mp3.php?cd=PSY01&track=050817.mp3

^^ The track has a exact length of 9 minutes and weights ~12mb at 192kbit/s.

Thanks for listening and best regards,
rübe


Beast


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Posted : Aug 17, 2005 19:34
sometimes great spirits here-...are we in goa sometimes??? ( :

but i thynk is faulting somethings........for example the bass hasnt body, psychedellic lines are faulting too...you have too put more psychedellia on it...i like the sample voices and how you fix it!!!
but the song sound incomplete..but the things that you have are cool...you only have to put some more thyngs...

BOOOOM and goood luuck
rübe und luki


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Posted : Aug 18, 2005 16:30
>> ...are we in goa sometimes??? (:
Probably.

>> for example the bass hasnt body
What do you mean exactly? Would you prefer a clearer bass-sound? Or could a little tweaking the EQ do the trick?

>> you have too put more psychedellia on it
hmm. Do I? Of course, if you mix in a lot of weird sounds and noises, everybody thinks "now, this is psychedelic..". I don't think so, I guess... Perhaps I'm more into power and melodies..

>> but the song sound incomplete..
Yes, I'm working on it. I'll let you know when I have improved the song.

thanks a lot and best regards,
rübe
e-motion
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Posted : Aug 18, 2005 17:06
goa vibe... killer track !
AstRoMetriX
Astrometrix

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Posted : Aug 18, 2005 18:48
mmmmmm.....
ok...nice and airy....nice sounds.......too heavy on the melody....!!
kinda old goa style......im not sure that i like it.....
you need some more TECH in your sound!!
try to work more on the groove and less on the melodies......i hate f$#ink melodies...this is ACID music baby not E music...

but overall nice production!!!
keep up try to think......PSY PSY PSY SPY YSP

*************aStRo********************
Muzard


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Posts :  46
Posted : Aug 19, 2005 03:15
i really like it i don't know what other people r talkin about it sounds very good 2 me!
maybe the only thing i would change is making the bass fatter besides that i like it very goaa!!! yeah dude keep up the good work!!!!!
rübe und luki


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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 18:05
thanks for your kind words

@AstRoMetriX: If you hate melodies, you probably shouldn't listen to my songs, hihihi. (luckily you did anyway, hehe)

But you are right, I need to strengthen my "TECH"-skills. I'm working on it.

--

BTW: I have uploaded a new version of the song. Its 9:43 and 13.35mb now. (the link above points to the new version. The old version isn't online anymore)

Changelog: I added a fea hihat-variations here and there, got rid of the filter-sweep at 5:06, changed the break at 6:29 and the next part is completly new (bringing in the final theme: fast and strong, without pad but with bells, hehe) before the last part (unchanged) comes up. (and probably another few changes I can't remember anymore, hehe)

Hope you like it! I think, I'm going on to some new songs/ideas..

thanks a lot and best regards,
rübe
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