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Posted : May 1, 2012 23:14:03
Hello pps
In advance I would like to thank you for listening to the track.
It is a experimental work where I made a lot of "psy farts" and put them all on a beat.
Was quite fun doing that Hope you like it.
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : May 2, 2012 18:20
It's abit funky and bouncy. The mix is pretty thin and lacking dynamic. It has some cool sounds, but no direction. That piano thing isn't that well composed i think. Would be phatter with some cruncy synthline lead there instead. Some more melodic elements here and there and some ambience for better atmosphere and overall feeling would do great for this track imo. Im only listening with my laptop here but it do sounds like some stuff are abit to loud and hard on the ears. Otherwise, Good job!
keep fighting!
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Posted : May 3, 2012 02:52
Thank you for your time Wizack Twizack! With you pointing out the lack of dynamic range in the whole track I realy get the point. All the sounds are made on the same octave, more or less, which gives it this kind of monotony.
On the next work ill check that out for sure.
The story telling of the track is a bit diferent of the costom aproach - intro - main - outro. Just wanted to make something diferent and not so progresive, just like a soundscape and so cut out the intro completly which can be good for dj sets too.
You are right about the piano, when it comes in after the break it sounds great but gets a bit repetitive, ill gess it needs more variation over the time. The solution that came to me on the creation process was introducing more sounds to keep the interest.
Once again thank you for your insightfull critics Analysis and Organization for Refinement
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Posted : May 4, 2012 03:15
Hey mate!
I have to agree with our honorable fellow member Wizack Twizack about your track not having any direction.
But hey, for someone just foolin around it came out pretty nicely, keep working on it and you'll take it to the next level!
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : May 4, 2012 12:22
Nice sound's here and there But beside your rhythmical side work (Loops , Percussion and so - Runing the same all over) You have alot of sound improve to do . Keep practice This is the only way to get an high result's .
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Posted : May 4, 2012 20:16
yup, keep it up and you will definitely get it, you have some neat call and response going on around 1.30, that is pretty cool! but the sample at 1.50 is too loud, and your open high hat is sounding quite dry or at least too much like a sample from some sample pack. needs some sort of character. good stuff though!
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Posted : May 5, 2012 21:31
I get a bit puzzled when you refer that the open hit hats are dry, Ive eq'd them as best as possible and put a tad of reverb on them.
What kind of processing do you use to make them more wet?
There is one thing I heard on some samples of Infected Mushroom, it soudns like a snare which has a delayed tail. Do you make that kind of stuff?
There is also the coment about the quality of the sounds. What do you mean by that?
Of what I know is that on some sounds there are frequency intensity peaks which could be avoided by some compression or in last case limiting. But normaly I just like the raw sound comming out of the synthesizer best. The second point I get to is by making the sound and adjust it to a good volume level, mix it well into the track so that it is not too agressive to the ears.
But I might just be completly wrong with that arguments.
Thank you for your time and the nice coments Regards.
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