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Quantum Aura - Rambling Dreamer
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Psybro
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Posted : Oct 3, 2012 05:05:11
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Oct 3, 2012 05:24
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wo wo bass is screaming man too painful to hear like 1.23 or something when u tried something with panning the bass.. but i like the old skool vibe u have
need a lot more work on arrangement i think.. for u had me in it till max 4.00 and after that its more of rambling loony man.. where are you trying to go? also i just hear one perc loop?
i really liked it till around the first break man i guess you really need to work on the flow of things.. its all very scattered and gets boring.. end part have u heard after making? it sounded very off here didnt understand one bit
like the first part is nice man.. you should try to make a conscious shift into the next part and not just fill up the timeline. cheers man keep working
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Psybro
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Posted : Oct 5, 2012 08:38
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Oct 6, 2012 06:35
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Sound like a test or somthing ..
Home work :
* Mix .
* Delay - Only when/Where need .
* Integration of more tools ! (Lately i follow your project And i find your music very dry , You trying bring factory's , Machines And hardcore But this is not the way (So then the 'Hardcore' is stying only in your mind , (Or what ever what you tryd to get) .. And the listener can't get/Touch/Feel the all picture of your story) , Try build your song with 'Continuousness' .
* Motion , Stream and drive ! More loops and perc's .
* Emotion .. More synth's (Atmosphere , Leads And mello's) .
* Sound work .
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On 2012-10-05 08:38, Psybro wrote:
practice practice i will more
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More and more and more and more .. And more .. 
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Psybro
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Posted : Oct 7, 2012 03:53
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On 2012-10-06 06:35, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
Sound like a test or somthing ..
Home work :
* Mix .
* Delay - Only when/Where need .
* Integration of more tools ! (Lately i follow your project And i find your music very dry , You trying bring factory's , Machines And hardcore But this is not the way (So then the 'Hardcore' is stying only in your mind , (Or what ever what you tryd to get) .. And the listener can't get/Touch/Feel the all picture of your story) , Try build your song with 'Continuousness' .
* Motion , Stream and drive ! More loops and perc's .
* Emotion .. More synth's (Atmosphere , Leads And mello's) .
* Sound work .
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On 2012-10-05 08:38, Psybro wrote:
practice practice i will more
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More and more and more and more .. And more ..
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I shall continue to keep making progress my friend
you make a good point
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