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e-motion
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 00:12
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FaceHead
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 01:12
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nice kick and atmosphere it sounds very spacious at 3:29 after the killer build id add some really bizzarre sounds just till it goes back into the melodies and such at 5:00 sounds good but some of the melodies meshing together before the last part dont fit with eachother 6:00 that melody and lead is great maybe mae a one or two note variation in the pattern after a couple of times but i loved the last couple minutes it also sounds like your bass is lacking some low end the tone is good just didnt sound as powerful as it could
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e-motion
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 01:28
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thanks man  yeah a bit empty... i'm still building my synth skills, they got better now (that track is a bit old, didn't had the patiente to finish it), and i'll buy a serious pc next week so expect something
the kick and bass is always my problem but oh well time will change this
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e-motion
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 19:38
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no more?  |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 22:55
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some parts are good some parts are less good...
the track dosent flow as a whole at points and there is lots of dissonance between elements...i dont know if its intentional or you being in a hurry
as you say you didnt finish this one, i think a rater comment something serious you made
keep on tweaking!
Boom
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e-motion
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 23:16
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i did finished it... but it's an old track that was sitting here to be finished lol. and it's a serious track so i see i got to get better 
anyway i have to check this pitches... i can't feel the damn dissonance bah |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 23:25
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e-motion - ill give it a better listen...
but from reading this im confused
"(that track is a bit old, didn't had the patiente to finish it),"
ok i understand, its a old track that you did finish |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 23:43
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I like the groove..
but the leads and baseline dont fit in my ears.
are they all sharing same root?
also there is lots of key changes going on in a little chaotic manner....
you should try to stick to something simple...
i hear some some dissonance where i think there should be non... tension between dissonance and consonance is good, but not too much... and if there is alot of dissonance there should be a part with only consonance... if you dont want to have a very uncertain listener....
as its dance music i think its good to have some solid spots in a track...
if you want to talk more give me a Pm....
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e-motion
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Posted : Feb 6, 2006 18:03
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thanks for all the help new era. guess after i buy i new pc not only my production will rise but also my music |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 7, 2006 12:18
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e-motion - I am very sure it will 
you make some wicked melodies, just work on tuning your orchestra to same pitch and go from there |
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