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Pure Darkodelica
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 28, 2010 23:26:15
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rasmush
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Posted : Aug 29, 2010 00:44
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Very good !
Perhaps the change at 0.57 should be stronger or more gradual - a better reason for change than "its time for some changes".
Still a small detail.
Hope you will post some more minuttes in the future ! |
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 29, 2010 00:52
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thought as much too.... tht change will come a bit later actually.... i wil continue wid some more forest stuff and then a bit later comes in the power with tht synth.
shall upload a longer clip once i work further on it 
ps: does it take u places?  |
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Taii
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Posted : Aug 29, 2010 04:05
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 29, 2010 14:08
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ne more views guys? |
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Aug 29, 2010 20:56
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Well first of all it is just 1 min so its very hard to do a good critic as it sounds so empty right now, anyway it doesnt sound that bad but you could do more, so I suggest you to upload it again whenre youve got more stuff on it and also try better in soundcloud
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 30, 2010 13:15
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here is a new demo of the same track... around a min again but like u said it sounded empty i have tried to fill in more spaces....
http://www.sendspace.com/file/gdeyo0
let me know |
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 30, 2010 15:29
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yo guys ne one to comment? |
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 30, 2010 18:31
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i need help here... this project file is not openin nemore.... it seems to show an error and also the backup file in the trash folder is not openin...
i tried to run a diagnostic scan via fl studio itself but its still not workin.... ne idea what do i do ???
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 30, 2010 23:36
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problem solved |
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musAphira
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Posted : Aug 31, 2010 13:15
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yeah thats really a lot of Darkodelica 
nice tunes man!!!
maybe try to play with sidechaining kick/bass a bit or spend a little more eq'ing for the bass.
seems that the bass is a little bit to loud so that kick and bass are not completely "in balance".
but the tunes are really great. like that stuff!!
so finish that track bro !!!
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 31, 2010 17:16
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hey thanks bro... really glad u liked it
a few of my pals told me abt the bass too... but i like tht bass sound... and it is sidechained with the kick... mayb need to jus lower the volume a bit so it can fit in nice
shall update ull once i work more on this project
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Cosmic Tandav
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Posted : Sep 1, 2010 13:35
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hey bro ..
bass needs a lil bit tweakin to go with the kick .it sounds ok ..but it can sound a lot better ...
nice watery sounds ..try a lil bit of variation with the sounds each time it comes on ....maybe u can have some atmospheres in the background as well ...throw in some eveolving pads with some rev in the start of the track so it doesnt sound empty in the start and take it out as the leads and fx come in so u have more space when they do ...
keep workin i like it all except the voice sound that comes towards the end ..maybe if its a lil more dicreet it would sound better..
try to finish atleast half the track so we have an idea of where the track is headed ...
so far sounds like u on the right track ..needs a lot of work though
good luck bro !!
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Sep 1, 2010 14:18
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hey many thanks for ur reviews.... definitely ill work around and experiment wid what u have suggested.
imm relatively poor when it comes to workin around with pads and atmospheres so gnna experiment till i get it right....
and tht really is not the start its jus like a rough layout of how it would start.... the intro is still pendin |
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Sep 1, 2010 20:03
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U are rising with your abilities bro.. Just follow the comments from the Isra-Soldiers here and u will be able to make good music..!! Keep it creative.. )
Cheers bro.. |
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