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Marrukka
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Posted : Apr 8, 2011 13:31:26
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Mansikka
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Posted : Apr 8, 2011 15:08
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I liked it.
I just LOVED the intro. Music box in the psychedelic music is a wonderfully twisted combination (first album of principles of flight, some songs of easily embarrassed etc...). Just. Loved it. Perhaps that rised the bar a bit too high.
The speach sample before the beat felt unnecessary and the kick n' bass was a letdown at first. Did'nt quite suit the soundscape what I had imagined. But after that it started rolling very nice. Cool twisted sounds.
I suggest you add some sound or noise or something right there where kick starts or something that fits the previous atmoshpere. Or start building towards dark earlier with noises and such.
It's a good track, surprising twist
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knocz
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Posted : Apr 9, 2011 18:31
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I like the concept but the beat isn't in the same key as the intro, which makes it feel like two completely different tracks..
Like what Mansikka said, the listener after that intro is expecting something a lot lower.. try lowering your initial bassline 7 or 8 steps down 
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panike
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Posted : Apr 9, 2011 21:31
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love the intro,not diggin the rest of the track,its way too fast for me
PS: where did you get de intro samples from? they seem familiar to me,but can't remember from where Soundclound:
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Marrukka
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Posted : Apr 10, 2011 17:46
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thx for feedback =)
i'll check the bassline
the samples are from the movie "dead silence"
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