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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 3, 2009 07:01:43
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Yoo music makers! i just started this out..
Its a rough sketch! I would love feedback from you guys who are into this style! Melodic Morning fullon
Any pointers that can make this track better would be great! i want it to be progressive and flowing... Is the bass too heavy? i made it in headphones...
http://www.sendspace.com/file/7cjzga
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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 3, 2009 07:45
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'the recording got a little dodgy, gonna rework tomorrow in monitors... Just got so keen on getting some listeners... my bad!
Patient is a virtue...
I just played it my monitors and notice all these other artifacts... the bass needs to be fixed, sounds like it got some plops and pops, I recorded it live to my digital porta..
Sorry for the inconvenience people, i promise il do a better version tomorrow..
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Nov 3, 2009 11:27
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hey,, that sounds really good.
you have this clarinet type sound that repeats on straight through the song - if it was me i would put a break in middle, like what you have going on in the end, then bring the song back with something different but on the same flow to keep it interesting.
strong kick & bass. nice free flowing music.
let us know how it pans out.
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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 3, 2009 19:16
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On 2009-11-03 11:27, *eLliSDee* wrote:
hey,, that sounds really good.
you have this clarinet type sound that repeats on straight through the song - if it was me i would put a break in middle, like what you have going on in the end, then bring the song back with something different but on the same flow to keep it interesting.
strong kick & bass. nice free flowing music.
let us know how it pans out.
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hey thanks man!! 
i got a new version now, without automation though and not made any arrangement changes,
i want to bring this into cubase but i have dilemma on certain things...
i think ill export bass and kick and percs but leave the synths open...
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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 3, 2009 19:20
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Elad
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Posted : Nov 4, 2009 00:47
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general sound quality is good
no horrible un-tuned melody
but what bother me is too much repetative in the leads section.. i would totaly change direction at some point or adding different melody or new sound etc.
abit generic in term of style but all in all 'working' 
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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 4, 2009 04:45
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On 2009-11-04 00:47, Elad wrote:
general sound quality is good
no horrible un-tuned melody
but what bother me is too much repetative in the leads section.. i would totaly change direction at some point or adding different melody or new sound etc.
abit generic in term of style but all in all 'working'
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Hey Elad! Thanks for taking the time, i really appreciate it 
As of now its just really a rough sketch.
I will refine it and think about what you said... the idea is to make a progressive fullon track.. what i want to do is to automate the sounds so they dont get boring...i have added more stuff... going to add some wind and some choir also...
lets see what happens or hear.. hehe
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Suloo
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Posted : Nov 4, 2009 08:05
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i really like the track..
some little things could be worked out more imo..like maybe a change in percussion rythm , the intro maybe little more tension with filtering or so..
one nice brake , not too long but kinda evolving that could power up the track..and mybe a whispering female vocal here and there..
just some things i thought would be nice to hear..the rest is really nice..
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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 6, 2009 15:31
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On 2009-11-04 08:05, Zork wrote:
i really like the track..
some little things could be worked out more imo..like maybe a change in percussion rythm , the intro maybe little more tension with filtering or so..
one nice brake , not too long but kinda evolving that could power up the track..and mybe a whispering female vocal here and there..
just some things i thought would be nice to hear..the rest is really nice..
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Hey Zork! Thanks mate!
I will take what you said into consideration, very nice pointers. Im going to do some serious work to this track very soon...
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Freeflow
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Posted : Nov 6, 2009 15:32
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Thanks all for your feedback its very appreciated!
All your ideas will be taken into consideration...
Cheers and have a great weekend!
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