Grevinsky
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Posted : Jul 24, 2012 12:07
Heavy intro.
I like the base but the kick seems somewhat dry to me(can be the translation to my speakers also), as i notice now later in the track when it gets more busy it sounds good.
It sounds like your base gets very compressed from the sidechain during the break at 1.40.
You make a very good drive with ure K n B.
Very well arranged also, you know where to display your sounds.
Some leads sound somewhat low to me, in the early parts of the track.
Cool break around 5 mins.
You kind of miss it(break wise) at 6.20 tho, i dont think that cymbal makes it purpose.
It sound kind of odd to me when you change the key of the base at 6.25 to me.
at 7.20 there are very harsch sounds, sound strangely reverbed and abit "dirty", perhaps thats intended but too me it sound too distorted.
Im no fan of full on. But you sucessfully creates a good drive, and you make good use of breaks and progress it well. Good job with that
Architekt
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Posted : Jul 24, 2012 14:47
Hey mate, nice track! Good drive on the main kick/bass percussion, and liking the buildup with new stuff being added. You got the rhythmic placing done well - it keeps the energy. I think you could enlarge some of these sounds. Give them their own solid frequency space where they can occupy it full, if that makes sense? I do this by eq and sidechaining synths - you get no clashing this way
Breakdown is good! Interested. I agree with Grevinsky about the drop - needs some more work, lost the energy - but the idea is good - just keep the energy there! It comes back again 6:50+ which is cool.
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jul 24, 2012 23:25
Excelent review brothers!! Right now I´m editing the track and actually doing some of your suggested changes because I also agreed. Thank you very much ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jul 29, 2012 01:08
well i actually gaved up at that track because so much other ideas that didnt fit were comming so i did a new one, i think its way better but most important it really expres what i feel, tell me what you think?
MrMaunus
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Posted : Jul 29, 2012 01:21
Very nice sound.. (Good mixing in other words) Fullness in bass and clear synthsounds. Liking the track getting more intensive during it http://destinationeuphoria.bandcamp.com/
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Jul 29, 2012 01:28
thanks man! im having so much effort working on my music im glad finally its giving good results ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
Architekt
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Posted : Jul 29, 2012 03:47
