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psytrance attempt : 3 tracks , help ?

mk47
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Posted : Sep 1, 2009 22:53:21
hi all , been a long time i havent tried any computer music? things , but i decided to fool around once again and came across these few earlier attempts at psytrance , im not very good , but maybe u guys can help me out by giving a few pointers etc , so heres a

night? track 145 bpm :
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=batch_download&batch_id=YkxMaUNDVnM5NVUwTVE9PQ

? track 145 bpm
http://www.sendspace.com/file/c81xln

138 bpm something
http://www.sendspace.com/file/6mn83t


like i said , not very good , but do take a minute to listen and gimme some tips etc , thanks


Perma Fry
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Posted : Sep 2, 2009 15:25
yo
I liked your 145 bpm sounds. very acidic.
Nice kick bass. Nice ideas in percussion
Raise the volume of the overall mix. Sounds too soft for mp3.

G'luck

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mk47
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Posted : Sep 14, 2009 11:25
bump ..

hi , thanks for the listen psychoanalysis , anyone else , a few tips and pointers would be nice

thanks
mk47
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Posted : Sep 21, 2009 23:11
ill bump one last time , cmon folks , help me out a bit here , thnx .
carbonic
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 07:17
Hey I downloaded one of them...corona_.
Nice track...it sounds Jahbo influenced to me. The flow is nice...all you need is some mastering on and it and it will be great. Also the bassline change at 0:48-0:1.00 and at 3:18 if you ask me should be removed, it doesn't go with this track. Otherwise cool! As for the others I don't have much time right now and the internet sucks.

Cheers
Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 10, 2009 11:01
Hey mk47! Very cool track! with lots of motion!
to the points!

like carbonic says the baseline change at 0:48 to 1:00 is a flow stopper in my opinion
The section after that is wicked.. rest as follows is very nice.. also i think that 3:18 is questionable but it depends on the long run...

One thing i must mention is that i think that there are a bit too many voice samples, but its okej, you can get away with it, but less is more!

Also i think the mix is very nice!
all i can say is try and finish it and you will have a nice track!

ill peep in if i get some ideas or thoughts!

cheers

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