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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 10:04:05
Hi, here bothering you again!! I know is not been a week since my last post, but this time is different I would love for you to hear this song and maybe You can give me your opinion, I think is really cool, I know is not perfect, I'm really far away from being a pro, but I really like this song it has a little feeling to it and I finally got it mastered. I was on acid practically all the way in the construction of the track ! the flute in the middle is really cool I think hehe, well any advice like always is very welcome, my bassline is not the best, like always hehe but I really hope someone likes it! well thanks in advance! and have a killer week !!!! peace!!!
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 12:14
Nice one, the part after the break seems better, more breathable, seems the acid passed the euphoric stage and sunk in Tudo que é melhor e mais superior em mim saúda tudo que é melhor e mais alto em si
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 12:38
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 12:39
Thanks man! haha yes the second part was made after the first 5 hrs of intense tripping, and then, when I could finally sit down and stop talking to the wall, I started doing that second part, more relaxed! A unicorn was still in the room, but he was sitting in the couch quiet so I continued producing.
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 12:40
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On 2014-04-17 12:38, smoker wrote:
nice track
Thank bro
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On 2014-04-17 12:39, Bipolar wrote:
Thanks man! haha yes the second part was made after the first 5 hrs of intense tripping, and then, when I could finally sit down and stop talking to the wall, I started doing that second part, more relaxed! A unicorn was still in the room, but he was sitting in the couch quiet so I continued producing.
Aslong as he stays quiet, i can't take those endless interuptions while im producing Tudo que é melhor e mais superior em mim saúda tudo que é melhor e mais alto em si
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 14:02
Hahah I know man, I cant take those interruptions either!!
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 14:22
Hey man.
Sounding better and better!, mix is getting better to.
Base and kick is maybe bit too punchy. It disappears abit in the mix too.
1.37 it would be cool if u went full power baseline.
Otherwise cool track.
Nice with some oriental vibe at 4.30, the perc suit well there..
4.40 nice with the triplets and basework.
Gj! think my favorite track of you.
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 15:20
Thanks man!! that's really cool for you to say that! thanks a lot!! that full power bassline at 1.37 is a cool idea, I'm going to try it! thanks a lot for listening! and the cool ideas! have a great day!!
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 17:28
nice story you telling here. reminds my the time when i had unicorns and minotaurus in my studio sitting quite on the couch
but let me give some input.
its very nice made till now. you should work more on the percussion. they dont cover the spectrum they could. snare is a nice basic sound but it needs another layer too... the bass sidehain is maybe a little bit too harsh. i mean the groove. its like nit perfect in time i think. dont stop here. tracks is super. the flutes are amazing for my taste http://soundcloud.com/neonjade
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 17:55
Haha thanks man, those were the times, Thanks a lot for the tips, I haven been working in percussion after I made this song, nice for you to mention, I did notice that, it lacked more groove, and my bass I think is terrible hehe, bass lines have been my nightmare since day one,! Buts thanks a lot for the nice words and the advices I will continue to apply every advice I learn here from you guys to improve every day! thanks a lot! ! have a wonderful week! peace!!
haha yes the second part was made after the first 5 hrs of intense tripping, and then, when I could finally sit down and stop talking to the wall, I started doing that second part, more relaxed! A unicorn was still in the room, but he was sitting in the couch quiet so I continued producing. 
