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Posted : Feb 19, 2011 20:04:23
hello there
i just finished a track, and i would like to know your opinions or feedback. also critique is appreciated, while im not very experienced.
thx
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Posted : Feb 19, 2011 21:35
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Posted : Feb 19, 2011 21:43
i liked the sound man,nice and trippy, got some good flow going, like the 2:02 part, the break after that little short but fits nicely, and nice bass change after that, but ur percussions need better sounds or need to be atleast be eq'ed properly in place,they dont have that grunt and flow, percussions make the flwo i think, so work on them more, 3:42 comes in nicely,and i think that reverse kick u use, is little too loud,same for 4:40 percusiion somehow not fitting in snug,but the idea behind it is real good, tribal kindo feel in them, overall good sound bro, work those percussions, add some good lead sounds also, feel like canadian/south african kindo nice colour sound,dig it
peace
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Posted : Feb 20, 2011 03:31
thx gonna notice that
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Posted : Feb 28, 2011 21:10
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Posted : Mar 2, 2011 15:48
yay, here the finished one:
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Posted : Mar 2, 2011 20:26
I think it's pretty good for early works, I like the flow in the second half of the song more than the first and I would do some more eq ing to the snare it sound a bit harsh, but that's just my tastes.
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