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Digital Psyence
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 13, 2005 19:15
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Digital Psyence
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 19, 2005 02:54
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Nobita
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 19, 2005 04:42
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Hey, excellent track man ! The production is real tight, especially for the kick+bass combo. The melodies are good, nice use of FX here and there... I really like the opening trancy melody at :26. You should perhaps put a flange or a filter on the main lead and "twist" it's sound by manually playing with them and automating to get a more psychedelic sound as right now it sounds a bit too anthemy, and perhaps add a more variation in the melodies... but this is nit-picking (adding some delay might give it a more trippy psy sound as well). I love the end, nice pad and buildown. But you should rework that melody that kicks in at 8:09 , it either doesn't last long enough and is a bit too loud and pronounced for an ending melo , or it should not be introduced at all at that point. Impressive work overall ! Those basslines and beats are killaaargh as they say 
 Row row row your boats gently down the stream; merrily merrily merrily merrily life is but a dream. |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Nov 19, 2005 17:10
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Digital Psyence
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 19, 2005 19:48
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Wow!!
Thanks for the replies
Well, i agree with all your opinions! its good - but not special, but when i was almost done with this track, my cpu where going like 90% and higher in cubase, so i had to just finish it off. Looking forward to getting powercore, UAD, and Monitors at least - so i can make more professional tracks.
Anyhow, im glad that the kick&bass combo is good, thinking about its done on headphones |
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sy000321
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 19, 2005 21:57
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hello there,
i really like this track, please update us if you ever get to finish it
nice melodies, can't really comment on the bass because i'm listening n small headphones
keep up the good work 
roll a joint or STFU :) |
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Digital Psyence
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 20, 2005 00:10
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I dont think i will go any further with this one. i just want to proceed with a new one, and try to make whats good, even better. But right now i only have headphones to work on, and i am pretty tired of that
in March 2006 i get money to buy really nice gear. Then the fun begins
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Nobita
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 20, 2005 04:21
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Hey, Rinkadink made the awe-inspiring "Rabbit from Darkside" entirely with headphones and a laptop... gear is not that important
Row row row your boats gently down the stream; merrily merrily merrily merrily life is but a dream. |
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Digital Psyence
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 20, 2005 10:38
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did he also mix it on headphones? i dont think its recommended to work that way. The headphones i use also colour the sound too much. |
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