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psypoem
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EYB
Noized
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Posted : Jan 4, 2005 08:08
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check it out
jo jo
check it out now
jo jo
whats up
jo jo
ui ui tiffy
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_Vanessa_
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Posted : Jan 4, 2005 16:13
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Long and vast we live
new community must come
new ideas will brand
we all shocked
still locked...
Tsunami! who's mistake?
Somethings in life we will never get a final answer
power spread for those who bravely stayed
the smile on my face cannot delay
I still have my heart bumping in the world
the bodies who lost the possibilities
will remain
in memory
of me and of those
who felt ...
and of those who did not feel also
if i am the lucky one to be alive
love is the light, love is the answer
the comfort
I am here, safe,
waiting for you
my prince SHA
"Never let a critic shut your soul"
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chris-t
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Posted : Jan 5, 2005 16:13
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i am sorry to say, but this "poem" doesn't make any sense at all.
by the way: tsunamis are no one's mistake or fault. they are natural phenomena and occur from time to time without any human influence. not everything what happens in the world can be blamed to the humans. but you can be blamed for writing confusing stuff here which no one can understand. |
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EYB
Noized
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Posted : Jan 5, 2005 16:18
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'Fuck the hifi bitches'
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Die die die u damn hifi bitches
DIE!!!!
'this is not so good in quality'
Fuck u, oh u damn hifi bitch, fuck u
DIE!!!!
Real Psychodelicness will rule the world!!
Hifi bitches go to hell
Die die die u damn hifi bitches
DIE!!!!
'mp3 is not so good'
Give me the chainsaw
DIE!!! DIE!!! DIE!!!
'this is not so good in quality'
Fuck u, oh u damn hifi bitch, fuck u
DIE!!!! DDDDIIIIIEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
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IndiAlien
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 5, 2005 17:15
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why don't you show us how write poems chris-t 
btw.... my peom was about my personal experience with the tsunami.... YOU weren't meant to understand it !
but that can't be blamed to you.
rrreal emotion in that one EYB 
q(@ _ @)p
there is a light that
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_Vanessa_
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Posted : Jan 5, 2005 18:03
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oh no since when poems is got to make sense to everyone. U shouldn't even read my poems, cause my english is not very Good. HA
and since when WHO can not be written in metaforas?
EYB, I can see u got yourserf there hehehe HAHAHA
IndiAlien I loved you Tsunami poem, make some more about that if u can I will be very pleased to read it!
"There is a beggining for an end of everything"
Peace deaf people, we all together...
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IndiAlien
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Posted : Jan 5, 2005 18:54
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 _Vanessa_
Put a smile on your face…
Black and White
Good and Bad
Yes or No
Happy or Sad
If we all looked the same
We’d get tired of looking at each other
If we all talked the same
We’d get bored of talking to one another
One persons rubbish
Is another humans treasure
Context, Intent, Circumstance
Calculate- to ease pressure
Big and Small
Dark and Light
Up or Down
Left or Right
If a word exists to the end of thought
It is but a compromise
But if the talking ends before the thinking does
Ugly conflict will surely arise
What I am try to say
Where I am trying to go
Is my private destination
You may not, but I Know
Love and Hate
Awake or Asleep
This I shall have
And that you can keep
But trust me…. just keep smiling 
L&L 2 all
q(@ _ @)p
there is a light that
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Venom29
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Posted : Jan 12, 2005 16:26
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Whilst jamming on the dancefloor
my friend needed to feed,
So he begged and asked for more,
more of that wonderful weed!
So I tried and tried and tried,
But fuck man! I couldn´t even see!
My neurons were fried,
I had taken too much LSD!
So, instead of rolling a joint,
I gave my sweaty hands a wipe.
I mean, what was the point?
I´d rather have a pipe! |
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phunster
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Posted : Jan 13, 2005 13:40
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as a young eagle I fall off the nest
and abruptingly learn to fly ...
down to the valley thru cold winds
... 'till the safe landing on a tree .
after a short rest, tried to fly again
now by will I spread my wings
and turn back to my home
conscious and clever
never than before .
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_Vanessa_
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Posted : Jan 13, 2005 16:42
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The miseducation of Lauryn Hill
I just think this touch me so much that I decided to share, with the some hungry souls out there.
My world looks so fast today
The past seems so far away
And I’ve
Squeeze so tight that I can’t breath
And every time I’ve try to be
What someone else thought are we
So cold
I wasn’t able to achieve
But deep in my heart
The answer is:
It wasn’t me
And I’ve made up my mind
To define my own destiny
I look at my environment
And wonder where the fire went
What happened
To everything I use to be
I hear so many fights for help
Searching outside of themselves
Now I know their strength was within me
And deep in my heart
The answer is:
That wasn’t me
And I’ve made up my mind
To define my own destiny...
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Isis
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 13, 2005 18:17
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...drifting..open spaces...a memory beyond
just out of reach off the burning fog
and all of a million questions keep pelting like the rain
what wouldnt i give, to see your vision again...
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_Vanessa_
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Posted : Jan 14, 2005 19:53
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and all of a million questions keep pelting like the rain
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this is one of the most beautiful lines I have ever read in my life,,, maybe it is just because I love the rain, u have wonderful imagination Isis, thaank you. |
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_Vanessa_
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Posted : Jan 16, 2005 12:58
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This is to do with my two female housemate who is against people having children, I think I was once like that, but then… no more worries….
You
Hey you
Don’t forget to lock the door when you leave
When you come back
Make me tea
Sunday morning and I try to think
Who have I been?
Who I am?
Who are we going to be tomorrow?
I have spend half of my life worried about the world
Hey
Today I don’t want to worry
It is not the reason I was born
The reason I don’t know
I just know it is not the reason I was born
So you, don’t forget to lock the door when you live
And when you come back bring on the tea
The door is not to bugler come in
The tea is to make me warm
This dangerous catastrophic world is where I live
Fear and worries makes me move on
Is it the right direction?
I guess I will know only when I go there and see with my eyes
Where else can I go
Have I got another choice?
Babe, I don’t know
Did your parents know when they had you?
So why da sake no more children in the world?
We're like flowers, we are the reason the word world exist
Shit? Yes…
But that is where we live
Fortunately!
God couldn’t run it perfectly
Nice try………..
It is done!
It sounds perfect!
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fabio_bapho
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 10:27
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true was and will like the true
never only the songs
i like more of the positive vibes than some guys only want some songs
and we dont like it
we like friends and made friends
and we respect some guys/girls but some guys we not respect
it's normal 
but we like more when we feel some moments
when we feel with some guys/girls trust in our friendship , but not only in my music but in my person
and sometimes i dont believe wich i can trust
but i like of all
coz brazilian people is/are amazing people
not problem in here
and if someshit-person fight against with us
we are already for the rage, for the fight and for the all bullshits
just tell us with what the problem
and we will want get fuck some souls
and baphomet engine is true !!!!!
true underground !!!
and we want money
and we want friends
and we want all
underground dont need fake persons
and the underground need money for some shits it's true
if u dont believe in this idea ....
fu* u |
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Justin Chaos
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 11:26
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On 2005-01-22 10:27, fabio_bapho wrote:
true was and will like the true
never only the songs
i like more of the positive vibes than some guys only want some songs
and we dont like it
we like friends and made friends
and we respect some guys/girls but some guys we not respect
it's normal
but we like more when we feel some moments
when we feel with some guys/girls trust in our friendship , but not only in my music but in my person
and sometimes i dont believe wich i can trust
but i like of all
coz brazilian people is/are amazing people
not problem in here
and if someshit-person fight against with us
we are already for the rage, for the fight and for the all bullshits
just tell us with what the problem
and we will want get fuck some souls
and baphomet engine is true !!!!!
true underground !!!
and we want money
and we want friends
and we want all
underground dont need fake persons
and the underground need money for some shits it's true
if u dont believe in this idea ....
fu* u
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No more drugs for THIS man...please!!!
My fake plants died, because I did not pretend to water them. |
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