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z1P^
Megalopsy
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Posted : May 24, 2003 02:24
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Posted : May 25, 2003 10:52
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Very nice, liked it. keep on! |
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Kaz
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Posted : May 25, 2003 15:56
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Just listened to the newest one. The kick isn't clear enough on the groove (needs to be more bass oriented). Soundwork is very energetic (a la Lish - Green Show in some parts), but the percussion just doesn't keep up. Maybe starting out with a groovier bass and move to the full-on one a bit later would give this track a lot of extra depth. Keeps going forward in a very dancefloor way, around 3:11 the need for a significant rise in the power factor is felt, when the guitars go on their own, the track feels too empty.
Basically from this point on, you should add short passages from time to time (like cutting the last bassdrum off, giving a short moment of silence and then let the next part rip... stuff like that) and less long ones, and keep the elements replacing eachother and adding to one another in a way that it gives a little bit more power each time, and voila, this track will reach a much more high energy level.
Also, the ending is a bit too abrupt.
I liked the elements in this track, but it just kind of gets lost in itself around the 3 minute mark. A lot more potential in this than it's current execution.
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z1P^
Megalopsy
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Posted : May 26, 2003 08:42
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first of all i really appreciate your reviews!
yeah kaz you are completely right, the track is a little bit repetitive and there are very few diferent lines, also the fullon, as you said, starts to soon, more groove is needed to put you in trance before the violence comes,
i think it was a great idea with very poor elaboration, but dont worry ill fix it out.
in fact it doesnt have an ending, 
and yes, it sounds like shit, but i havent payed attention to the master yet.
thanx for listening to out stuff, and we'll keep on the hard work, cya pals.
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