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Psynthex - Defeated by the tribal man / Progressive tune on 135bpm

Psynthex
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Posted : Feb 15, 2008 16:59
Hey guys,

This is actually my first independent tune made on Fruity loops. Hope you will like it. Actually its just a preview of it / 3 minutes long and some elements are missing, but would be glad if you could tell me your opinion.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/7upuzo

Cheers,
P.           Psynthex [ Vertikal Records ]
http://www.myspace.com/psynthex

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Nerso
Nerso

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Posted : Feb 15, 2008 22:56
Good work...mate


cheers
Psynthex
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Posted : Feb 22, 2008 19:59
Quote:

On 2008-02-15 22:56, Nerso wrote:
Good work...mate


cheers



Thank you man

This is the final work:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/uqvesv

I am sure it aint perfect, but we all need to start somewhere

cheers,
P.
          Psynthex [ Vertikal Records ]
http://www.myspace.com/psynthex

Minniq [ Parked Below Records ]

Frequent Pill [ Ultimae Records ]
aseem
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Posted : Feb 23, 2008 22:03
very nice...

post it after u add some effects on it...

but.. nice and grovvy..
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Psynthex
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Posted : Feb 24, 2008 11:58
Hey guys,

Here is the link. Have uploaded it again, because the previous one didnt work.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/biaudv

Cheers,
P.           Psynthex [ Vertikal Records ]
http://www.myspace.com/psynthex

Minniq [ Parked Below Records ]

Frequent Pill [ Ultimae Records ]
orange
Fat Data

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Posted : Feb 24, 2008 12:34
hey my man.
1st.
dont use so obvious presets... specialy when they dont fit well.
2nd.
ur kick and bass combo is to raw.
3rd.
the continuus kick fills are bad and dont sound nice.
4rth.
dont break the track every 15 seconds it spoils all the flow.
5th.
u need more than just a kick, bass, hihat, and 2 syths to make a track.

need to start working on ur groove more add more elements like a snare and some more percussion.
try to balance ur mix alot before u add any synths on top.
if the basis of the track dont flow the rest will suffer alot.

keep working.           http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic
Psynthex
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Posted : Feb 24, 2008 12:58
Hey man,

Thank you a lot for your comment. I really appreciate it, because only that how i can improve my producing cappability - by receiving some honest opinions and prepositions based on the track ( what i should do, what i shouldnt do, what i can do better etc... )

Thank you again. i am working on this one for 3 days already ( for adding new stuff, additions etc.. ) i have improved a bit ( by adding a flow ) will cut the pauses out, will do some effects and post it after

thank you again,
Psynthex

p.s: But of course, this is my very first track Gratefull to my friends and great manual scripts
          Psynthex [ Vertikal Records ]
http://www.myspace.com/psynthex

Minniq [ Parked Below Records ]

Frequent Pill [ Ultimae Records ]
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