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PSYCHOSIS - Scary Mary- New night track 147bpm (Comments plzz)
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Haris (Psychosis)
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Posted : Jan 17, 2006 14:01
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FaceHead
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Posted : Jan 17, 2006 20:47
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the begining is scary will the track follow??? I was expecting more from your kick and bass the way everything was setup in the intro. maybe just your kick needs more oomph. but all the samples and everything are nice alot going on but it all fits. the break at 2:00 is unique
all in all not bad a little to evil for my taste but still good. maybe just some mastering and itll be done im sure this sounds completely different on a large system though.
could you review mine??
thanks
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CLAW
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Posted : Jan 19, 2006 02:10
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gill
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Posted : Jan 19, 2006 13:06
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nice spooky beginning, amazing synth work  Do I hear a fruity sound here in the background, in the intro at 00:21? Good stuff anyway. Maybe I wit make the bass little bit more clear? Is it the vb1? I maybe would make the notes of your bass little bit shorter 1:57 hahahaha. I think it might sound a little monotone (2:36)? Mmm I don't know there is just something missing (in my opinion). Maybe it sounds a little bit the same if you see the rest? Nice unexpected change 4:54, but that synth that is going up and down is making it little bit "all the same". It's a good sound, no doubt about that! But I think you use it too much  It needs more variation, make some other notes with it too I also mis a little bit contrast I think. Very good atmosphere change at 7:17. Is it possible your voicesamples sound a little bit "unclean" (maybe thru the reeverb)?
Anyway it sounds all good to me but some things are missing, you have got it in you I can hear that You did a real good thing here 
good luck in the near future 
greetings,
Gill (Melorix)
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presto music
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Posted : Jan 19, 2006 16:02
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very cool, nice driving bassline, nice and punchy. |
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mikeonacid
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Posted : Jan 19, 2006 17:13
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nice 1 baba
i thing your next track will be a bomb
good luck bro
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DJ T-FAL a.k.a. nabeyan
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Posted : Jan 19, 2006 17:57
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It's cool!! and nice bass line.
I like this track.
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Haris (Psychosis)
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Posted : Jan 20, 2006 20:15
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Thanks 2 all 4 their coments Will keep in mind what you said and improve on the next!!!  Boom!!
If anybody wants this track in better quality just PM me no prob.. |
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Scrambled Headz
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Posted : Jan 22, 2006 19:40
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Very good track man
Nice bassline + kick and very good samples !
Personally i like the middle/ending part very much !
Ofcourse you need some mixing on this but man for a 'demo' track you did a good job !
Nice 1 man
where's the next one 
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linos(Temple Records)
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Posted : Jan 23, 2006 15:58
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Niceeeeee man, you are getting there! Told you about it on the phone......kicking some ass!
.......I will go lose my self, and wander up and down to view the secret city............. |
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Halusignor
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Posted : Jan 23, 2006 22:48
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Hey man getting better and better as i see..
Great bassline and kicks...Samples r awesome and the breaks too...
keep up the good work and hope to see some of your tracks getting released soon
Booom |
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Ricket
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Posted : Jan 24, 2006 22:12
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nice track
good work
Boooooom
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Haris (Psychosis)
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Posted : Jan 25, 2006 14:13
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