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PSYCHOSIS - No way out (148bpm Comments plzzz)
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Haris (Psychosis)
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Posted : Sep 10, 2005 18:42
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Positive Reaction
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Posted : Sep 10, 2005 22:09
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Pretty good sounds going on at 1 min. and 1:44. I like your reverb sounds. Very watery, Sounds good. Overall I think the track is somewhat repetitive and you need to go into a more interesting middle or ending. But that's just my opinion. Keep up the good work! |
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CLAW
CLAW
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Posted : Sep 10, 2005 22:38
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hey friend,
u know my oppinion on your track... U got pretty good start for your 1st attemnt.
add some volume to your bass & kick, remove some volume from your fxs in order not to eat up the whole velocity, and add some more games with percussions!
but do not stay in this one, more on... start new track.
u only gonna get better by practising and listening 
all the best 
boom
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mikeonacid
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Posted : Sep 10, 2005 22:49
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nice 1 man for the first track you got out
like my friend claw sed more practising and listening
will be good
good luck to the next1
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Meta-Morphosis
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Posted : Sep 11, 2005 11:50
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Oh yeah even i felt its to repetative... in the middle ...and as CLAW sd...add more volume on the bass!!!
otherwise a good effort
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Haris (Psychosis)
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Posted : Sep 11, 2005 17:42
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diskonekt
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Posted : Sep 12, 2005 13:24
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Hey man , just listened to the track and i must say not bad at all for your first finished one.
The mix is kind of dull - lacking in crispness i think - kick sounds a bit "empty" and bass a bit "muddy" - both need to be levelled up but nothing that cant be fixed.
Pay some attention to that stuff and you'll be rockin man.
You got nice ideas there ,especially liked one particular synth,the games with that DNB loop ,the panning of fx and the vocal work. That atmo pad is nice too but don't overuse it 
Keep it up , i'm sure next track is gonna be a lot better!
cheers 
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Sep 12, 2005 14:30
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Congratulations on your first Track and you should be Damn proud!
Very Good effort for a first track, its like light years ahead of what i'm trying to make! 
Look forward to hearing more from you man!
Well Done and Good Luck Haris!
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gill
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Posted : Sep 12, 2005 23:44
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Hi there good man!
You know what I told you on msn.
You're making killaaaargh tracks these days but still needs some more work. No worries time and experience will tell
Wish you muchos luckos in dos futuros
Good luckOS.DOS
Gill alios Melorixos
(anyone with some coffee?)
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Haris (Psychosis)
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Posted : Sep 13, 2005 13:43
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 Boom!! Coments and suggetions realy apriciated guys !!!Will definatley help in my future projects.
All the best!! Keep rocking 
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shroomz
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Posted : Sep 13, 2005 14:07
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@Haris ..
Your ideaz are wonderful .. The sample u used at 4:23 .. a woman enchanting .. that was superb .. Never heard anything like this on a dark list ... My friend Claw said it all .. Am sure u`ll work on it ..
Am waiting to hear more from you fella ...
Cheers from India ...
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DigitalX
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Posted : Sep 13, 2005 16:45
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Xamanist
Xamanist
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Posted : Sep 13, 2005 21:41
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hello
dark start, inspiring... good psycho samples
kick and bass sound nice, fx too
growing deeper and denser, insane-but-flowing sequence 
lovely lady voice in the middle-break...
restart has energy, but gets a bit monotone IMO because the same sounds are used and the atmosphere isn't much diferent too.. better end would make this great dark track a masterpiece IMO
best of luck dark-tweaker!
Boom
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Halusignor
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Posted : Sep 15, 2005 21:00
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Aloaa!\
Great track for a first one mate good sequence and timing...amazing samples and FX
hope u keep up the good work bro
Boom |
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electric stimulation
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Posted : Sep 19, 2005 01:36
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hey amigo
lovely darki track , nice samples, dark sounds and kicks 
i was sure that ur first will sound like that , keep the good work up, listen to the feedback and go
for ur next one 
boooom psychosis |
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