Psybro
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Posted : Mar 9, 2010 20:14:05
Give a listen and see if you like what you hear
Let me know your thoughts
Cheerz
Seth
Psybro
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Posted : Mar 10, 2010 07:25
no replies??? hmm thats a shame
theseyh
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Posted : Mar 10, 2010 07:49
i check it and sounds bass&kick not there, other elements in the track too loud i guess try to balance them, and i am not sure but maybe some reverbs need volume down too, i like the dark atmospher that tracks bring so work on to get clear listenin. hope i can explain my idea cuz i am not good at english in technical talks keep workin bro, i'll be followin you
abraham316
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Posted : Mar 10, 2010 17:02
Psybro
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Posted : Mar 15, 2010 00:55
no worries on your english theseyh no worries
thanks for replying bros Keep it dark
exkor
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Posted : Mar 16, 2010 22:08
Hey man,
I would cut everything before 0:20 out and start the track straight from 0:20.
The bass and kick are good for dark style and I think the balance is good too.
If it was up to me I would drag the intro a little bit with this style and switch the base (kick + bass) to standard dark style (3 to 4 bass notes between each kick). Then from time to time switch back to the bass + kick you have.
The hardest thing in making music under any genre is bringing in new things but keeping it within the boarders of that genre. From my perspective you were trying to work on a dark track but adding your own twist to it, however, I say don't take it too far away from standard so that ppl can hear what they understand as "dark" in your track.
hmm thats a shame 
no worries
