Midnight Sun
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Posted : Dec 25, 2014 04:07:18
Hi! I'm takin so long to finish this track, I usually take one full week but this time I have worked for 2 weeks and still not sure, I've got a total mess in my head.. but hopefully I will rescue this track, what do you think?
ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
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Posted : Dec 25, 2014 16:41
This is really promising one, started really great, it have "that" sound of dance floor banger, so I started shifting my attention towards that.
@1:36 that k&b could be automated with reverb, dunno, it begs for it concerning character of that vocal sample and that is actually a breakdown, so it could benefit really from more spacious sound, IMO and that could apply on all k&b breakdowns, it could really give more ambiance.
@2:17 I kinda felt it seeks for short hooky sound, than when I heard that you have that guitar, that was it, if you don't understand what I'm talking about, here @2:28, that's that unexpected hooky sound that works so good, you can take few notes from that nice guitar you have and introduce it too, it could really connect everything better
After 6 minute, I don't feel it any more, it's not epic enough, so it's not memorable that much, that vocal isn't either, but it can pass, you have some really good idea here and great potential, but I feel it needs "that epic" final lead, all sound spacious and somehow it seeks for "bite" and "in your face" at least in the end, something like this @5:45, not exact same lead, but that's how "bite" sounds to me, dunno, personal, but that's how I see it, you have something similar, but it's not biting, it's just nice synth sound if you catch my drift.
All in all I raised expectations big time here, so hence my critiquing towards sounding nothing less than epic and perfect, it's nice even now, but I think you can go to higher than that, you can really shake dance floors worldwide with this one, so I guess invest more time if you want, I think you have something promising here and that could be "that" track easily.
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Dec 25, 2014 19:51
Wow man that's an actual review! And your words are exactly what I needed to make this tune respect her mentor, I will totally apply your tips to it, they are really helpfull and I agree with them, I felt kindda the same but after 2 weeks of just being with this lady I got a bit lost in my head (ironically according to the track name and lyrics)..
So thanks again bro, will work on it!! ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
Xsze
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Posted : Dec 25, 2014 20:07
Awesome, taught I went over the line being Mr. Critique and all, just wanted to give you a boost in right direction, little personal one, but hey, interested to see outcome of this, gonna wait for update, have a blast working
smoker
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Posted : Dec 26, 2014 18:37
amazing dude great great track as alway's
come to Israel will go you're party for Sure -------------------------------------------------
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Dec 30, 2014 09:20
Hey man thank you! I had some health issues these days but I'm back to life and of course I would love to play there someday, next year will be my debut so hopefully I'll make it there!!
ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
smoker
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Posted : Dec 30, 2014 22:55
merry christmas bro and i wish you fast recovery
and Best Year
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Feb 9, 2015 20:22
Hahahaha come on smoker!! Anyway you weren't that far from what actually happened to the track, so far its forgotten in the bathroom.. Gave it up as I started another track (as usual).
Anyway I think I will countinue it soon.
ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive
Xsze
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Posted : Feb 10, 2015 09:44
Hahahhahaha
Good move, I guess you gave it good run and lost perception/interest, now it's best to wait for another dose of inspiration, go at it with fresh ears
