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Psychedelic Trance D# 145
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 18, 2013 18:56:38
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 18, 2013 19:58
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hi, i like your track, its cool, i think if it was my track i would try a diffrent kick, maybe a longer kick wih some low end punch, im probably wrong, and its a matter of taste. but good track. 
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 18, 2013 20:00
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also when you post your track in here just delete the s from the https: and it will show the track in here and wont direct people to soundcloud. just a tip you might like. good luck
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 18, 2013 20:16
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Thanks mate yeah i'v made it with bazzism and must admit that I still have to practice a lot more with it |
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 18, 2013 20:19
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And thanks for the soundcloud advice i'll try that next time.. Cheers |
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 18, 2013 21:55
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i use bazzism too, i love it, i also use sample too somtimes. |
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 18, 2013 22:10
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Yeah its great and the new noise feature is awesome.
i really don't use any sample beside my percussions have an idea that i have to synthesize everything me self  hehe |
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Dec 19, 2013 00:47
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i use perc samples, some drumloops, and sometimes kicks, but to be honest, i find it very hard to find good kick samples that fit my track and usualy end up making it with bazzism. |
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knocz
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Posted : Dec 19, 2013 01:36
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Hi!
This sounds really nice, it really doesn't seem like you are new to this! Are you sure you're not kidding us, or using a ton of pre-made samples and loops? It's really that good for someone new!
I like it a bit more moving and aggressive, but this is very good, nice mix and concept, really good usage of effects and blending between sounds
But, I think the track is missing some leads, as you mainly have a ton of effects sounds being mixed in together, each playing a part, but for a listeners "trip", it's all random bits and blips here and there and nothing main to focus: this isn't bad, but IMHO it could be better with this.
Like @5:01 you have a really nice acid lead being filtered in, and @5:16 if you played that lead with no filtering, and then let it rip through your last buildup, it would be awesome! It's like you are creating a lot of tension, building up, but nothing tends to release.
Apart of that, the sound quality is great. Please keep it up!
 Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 19, 2013 07:43
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On 2013-12-19 01:36, knocz wrote:
Hi!
This sounds really nice, it really doesn't seem like you are new to this! Are you sure you're not kidding us, or using a ton of pre-made samples and loops? It's really that good for someone new!
I like it a bit more moving and aggressive, but this is very good, nice mix and concept, really good usage of effects and blending between sounds
But, I think the track is missing some leads, as you mainly have a ton of effects sounds being mixed in together, each playing a part, but for a listeners "trip", it's all random bits and blips here and there and nothing main to focus: this isn't bad, but IMHO it could be better with this.
Like @5:01 you have a really nice acid lead being filtered in, and @5:16 if you played that lead with no filtering, and then let it rip through your last buildup, it would be awesome! It's like you are creating a lot of tension, building up, but nothing tends to release.
Apart of that, the sound quality is great. Please keep it up!
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Im not kidding. Producing since August 2012 and only used samples for percussions and to build impacts Everything else i'v synthesized with sylenth, massive, bazzism and virus ti And you are right need to work a bit more with my arrangement and story telling. I really appreciate your feedback bro.
For the lead maby i should turn the cutoff up when it kicks back ind and mute the pad and the vocal.?! |
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 19, 2013 07:47
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On 2013-12-19 00:47, COMET SHELL wrote:
i use perc samples, some drumloops, and sometimes kicks, but to be honest, i find it very hard to find good kick samples that fit my track and usualy end up making it with bazzism.
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Yes thats why i use bazzism to, much easier to tune the kick ind the right key for the bassline |
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Acid Clan
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Posted : Dec 19, 2013 12:52
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 19, 2013 18:44
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On 2013-12-19 12:52, Acid Clan wrote:
I like the track a lot
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Thanks bro |
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knocz
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Posted : Dec 21, 2013 13:10
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On 2013-12-19 07:43, Diagnosed Hippie wrote:
Im not kidding. Producing since August 2012 and only used samples for percussions and to build impacts Everything else i'v synthesized with sylenth, massive, bazzism and virus ti And you are right need to work a bit more with my arrangement and story telling. I really appreciate your feedback bro.
For the lead maby i should turn the cutoff up when it kicks back ind and mute the pad and the vocal.?!
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Wow man Amazing! Ok, it's been a year and 4 months, so you didn't just "start out", but still it's really good. Congratulations!
yeah for the lead you your mute everything else, but you could lead the vocal in to help fill out, or even glitch the vocal up in that part  But the important thing is: think about it, make a plan, execute it. No matter what! And, if you get good at that, you could execute anything you plan, and plan everything you think, so you'd just have to think!
Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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Diagnosed Hippie
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Posted : Dec 21, 2013 14:06
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Yeah i'll try that next time then
And thanks for your feedback Knocz, really helpful.
Marry Christmas |
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