*eLliSDee*
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Posted : May 3, 2010 06:14:47
160 bmp. all the sounds i made with vst myself expect for the vocals i downloaded (its Elmer Fudd hahaha) and hats.
only 5 vst used, that is 4 albino3 and 1 bassizm = 5
15 channels used including the 4sends.
i don't know. I'm not particularly keen on finishing this one.
i think the end part is allright.
What do you people think??
btw, this is my own pathetic attempt on mastering.
Maine Coon
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Posted : May 3, 2010 18:21
Sounds good, actually. I liked the middle part (1:07 - 1:37). It sounds like full on with Huntington's disease. I mean both in a good way - it sounds interesting, with broken rhythm.
*eLliSDee*
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Posted : May 3, 2010 19:52
lol. funny discription. it makes 100%sense.
do you think the disease might be contagious on the dancefloor?
u think i should continue the song?
Maine Coon
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Posted : May 3, 2010 20:26
^
I've never been to a trance party, so I wouldn't know what may happen on the dance floor. But I think it sounds interesting. Personally, I'd gladly check out the whole track - if you decide to finish it.
How is the track in an Indian scale going?
*eLliSDee*
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Posted : May 3, 2010 20:31
i've lots of idea on how to finish it. it just takes the time i could spend finishing better songs. if i proceed, i won't make it more that 5minuts
i'm spending lots more time on the other song..
it is on an indian tuning system also.
Obelizk
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Posted : May 4, 2010 03:23
I think you could use reverb and delay more selectively. The 2 leads at 1:15 have delays that seem to interfere with eachother.
On the gated effect, try placing the delay before the gate, and maybe turn down the feedback a bit.
*eLliSDee*
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Posted : May 4, 2010 10:27
obelizk, thank you
i was hoping i'd get some intrigued feedback like you gave me. i hear and understand what you say.
I really appreciate your input very much., i only post here to learn, so thanks again.
and thanks Maine Coon, i appreciate your thoughts also.
on FL
orange
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Posted : May 6, 2010 03:07
well......................
for a start u need to get rid of the flstudio sound in your mixes.. i can tell its made in it as soon as your drums kick in.
now!
its to fast for my taste.
and its too erratic like a seizure or like maine coon said.
and the production is kinda dry.. needs more wet
all in all i didnt like it but thats cos i dont like the style.
you are in a good way!
*eLliSDee*
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Posted : May 6, 2010 09:04
I agree the that the structure is erratic and that i should try to create better progression. BUT, i aslo don't want to follow stereotype formulas (like long pitch bends and sweeps) or any tipical methods. to be orignal.
still you are right. i need to make it flow nicer.
you say you notice the FLness in the sound.. this worries me a lot.
please give some advice.. Is it the panning law? if i change to trianglar it sounds very different.
i guess by wet, you mean more lushes sound with reverb.
so i have some things to work on.. but not on this song
the next one will be better and i'll post for adivce again. so that the one after that will be even better. and so on, until i have one that's lable worthy.
thanks mr.orange
orange
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Posted : May 6, 2010 13:53
the panning law changes nothing than an overall volume boost by a couple of db's leave it circular triangular will make panning worse.
most people will not notice that fl sound exept people that make music in fl.
you need to mix your track better to avoid flness add nice reverbs and eq better.
*eLliSDee*
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Posted : May 6, 2010 21:16
for me its a fun hobby and i love it more than anything. With electronic music i can be an entire band, a drummer, a bassist ,a sitar player(if i choose),,
but i aslo desire create entertaining music for an audience.
Its allright for me to sit alone in my room and play guitar.
It's just so much more enjoyable to jam with my friend for a small audience,, to spread a vibe
i want my qaulity to be up there. (lable worthy)
it's not the reason i make music, only a goal.
when you have 2 versions (mud & clear) of a great song. poeple will rather enjoy the Clear verion than the Muddy one.
