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Psy'ish dub'ish downtempo thingy 97 bpm
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Soma_Happiens
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Posted : Jun 7, 2011 12:09:21
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ArcaneInquisitor
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 9, 2011 17:17
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I love it! Absolutely beautiful.
My only advice would be to keep and eye on the bass. Particulairly in the first 30 seconds it was pretty rough and boom, but it soon settled down in the mix. |
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Jun 9, 2011 20:21
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I think you can work more with percussion and overall sounds. I found it boring because of the lack of some elements, some main melodies would be nice for this stuff i guess.
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Soma_Happiens
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Posted : Jun 10, 2011 08:57
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Thanks for the feedback guys. i did notice the bass going boomy at the beginning but it sounded ok, mabe on different speakers it sounds worse i will try to pull it down a bit at the starting stages.
Proto, i think you are right about percussion, some additional layers of hats and other percs would help me to build up some more tension. about addiional melodies, i would try some, but i believe it could change the overall mood of the track to something else and i don't want that, on the other hand it is interesting where it could go further 
anyways, thank you guys
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Sunrise Travellers
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 10, 2011 13:16
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Nice work mate! really like your track...
well i have to say that i prefer the bass more deep and sub and the percs you must work on it but you are in good line so...its up to you...
keep it up..
cheers///
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Soma_Happiens
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Posted : Jun 13, 2011 16:09
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Soma_Happiens
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Posted : Jul 5, 2011 00:17
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