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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 00:17:03
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supergroover
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 00:41
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Sounds pretty good. No comments until the first break that drops in a little weird. Maybe it could use some nice pads to add some space. But apart from that. Nice track! I am sure it works on the dancefloor!
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dj chichke
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 12:57
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you start a melody at 1:15 and finish it abruptly at 1:30. it's fills to me that this melody wants to keep playing. maybe to develop litlle bit.
maybe it's your style i don't know, but my problem here is that your track don't consistent. the progression of the track it's ;ittle bit stacked to me. between 3:40 to 5:40 it's fills to me not in place. all this effects games are not appropriate to this time of the track for my opinion at least. |
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Nectarios
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 14:45
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Pros: Nice music, and well produced.
Cons: There's something wrong with the bass' image. Not sure if its some layer you've got going but there's more mid and punch on the right side and its more wholly on the left side. The phase is all weird, not sure but I think you're going to run into some serious trouble when someone plays this on mono internet radio stations.
Check your correlation meters to make sure the bass will translate well on both stereo and mono.
Peace out.
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Scenix
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 15:37
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I think u could do the fade's a bit better. add some stop in it our so. like it hack insted. bcs it getting to quite for my taste. sounds a bit someone turnof by misstake but rest of track sounds good. really good sounds and fxs in this one!
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jonsta
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 17:40
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Cool track! I think the bass has too much chorus (?) going on. |
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Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Jul 2, 2010 20:58
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Upavas
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Posted : Jul 6, 2010 01:37
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Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Jul 6, 2010 10:14
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orange
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Posted : Jul 6, 2010 20:08
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Scenix
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Posted : Jul 8, 2010 12:29
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On 2010-07-02 20:58, Wizack Twizack wrote:
scentix what do u mean? what fades?
cheers ya'll!
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At 5:09 you turn the sound down then up again. Can you not make a crash or something when it going up to normal velocity? would sound much better in my opinion
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Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Jul 8, 2010 15:07
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yet sounding enough and full 