Fakso
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Posted : Jun 20, 2013 15:29
thanks, I appreciate that
maybe something about the lowend? too heavy in your opinion, it was one of the few parts that I was not sure about during the making considering mixdown
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Daktari
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Posted : Jun 20, 2013 18:42
Really good track & mix; low end is nice...
Grevinsky
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Posted : Jun 21, 2013 12:34
Hey dude.
Listening now.
The kick seems a bit loud.
The "klirriga"(swedish phonetic ) perc sounds start 1.29 disappear in the mix little bit later.
I miss something grand that you build towards in the first part of the track.
Now you kind of just wait for something to happend in the first part.
4.37 is nice but i would remove that perc sound in this part.
There is some other percussions sounds which lies beneath the mix which isent really getting heard.
5.30 you wouldent really need that break, it would serve better if you just keep build without getting into kb .
6.01 has the potential of a fat climax, what you been building for, but now it doesent really hit that hard. A lead there would serve very well, and driving percussions.
All and all its a nice song, if you worked abit more on the arrangement/composition it could be blasting on a dancefloor.
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Posted : Jun 21, 2013 13:00
Fakso
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Posted : Jun 21, 2013 13:35
thanks for the replys
@Grevinsky
thanks for the detailed analysis
Got problems to keep the mix clear when more and more sounds come in at the stage I am now mostly the percs have to suffer from this, but I already planned to move some percussions to different send reverbs and not nearly all to one smaller room
funny that 4.37 I did not really notice and I heard the track like a 1000 times
for 5.30 when you make long distance travel you need a break no really I wanted some variation I love those kb breaks and a change in bassline pattern and whilst stomping on the floor these are good times to rest a bit
to 6.01 I not sure, it the beginning of the 'outro' so some more actions isn't maybe that good?
) perc sounds start 1.29 disappear in the mix little bit later.
no really I wanted some variation I love those kb breaks and a change in bassline pattern and whilst stomping on the floor these are good times to rest a bit