ierofante
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Posted : Sep 15, 2011 14:47
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Are the sounds in the intro out of tune? It seemed so...
In my opinion you should also filter the percussions together with the kick and bass, when the sound is growing up in the intro.
The track seems good enough, except from mastering/equalization flaws: the bass and the kick are a bit opaque, and the percussion are not clear at all. Maybe a problem of soundcloud?
You should also try to use at least two melodic motives in the song, one for the first and one for the second part. The same used over and over is quite boring in my opinion.
I liked the most the delayed effects, they are very nice.
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