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progressive psychedelic night time trance stuff? check pls
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newstate
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Posted : Oct 19, 2006 04:57
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hey ppl.. this is a track iva made last month or so.., it has a soft guitar recorded at first part, well.. i would like an opinion (all kinda are welcome) ,so if anyone have time, here is the link, enjoy (hope so  )
http://www.sendspace.com/file/41xchu
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hypnotica003
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Posted : Oct 24, 2006 03:01
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yo its niceee...what program do you use? and can you send me the sounds you use there sickkkk |
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hypnotica003
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Posted : Oct 24, 2006 03:01
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yo its niceee...what program do you use? and can you send me the sounds you use there sickkkk |
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hypnotica003
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Posted : Oct 24, 2006 03:01
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yo its niceee...what program do you use? and can you send me the sounds you use there sickkkk |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Oct 24, 2006 15:16
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newstate
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Posted : Oct 24, 2006 15:44
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Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 24, 2006 17:24
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Cool work man!
i sense you are a good story teller,
i like the vibes in this track.. the energy is awsome.. 03:20 to 06:05 is delicious
the track has a line it follows and it dosent get boring.. constantly changing and new vocings comes and goes.. and i like the rockdrums.. very broad range of sounds you use...
great work...
keep it up, i want to hear more from you! 
you got talent..
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Oct 24, 2006 22:40
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that melody in the beggining is playing for tooo long and at least when the guitar comes in remove it or make some variations on it or something!!
after it finnaly changes its totaly old style and reminds of some israely/greek ala hollyman uplifting trance!
its not progressive its... hhmmm dunno something kinda oldish trance!
the parts of the track doesnt realy fit with each other they are too random!
keep working u will get there eventualy!
orange
 http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Oct 26, 2006 01:35
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The melody from the beggining starts to be some kinda annoying after a while. Maybe change some cutoff or put more fx on it after a while. I think the guitars dont really fit, maybe you should arrange them a bit more.
I think you should change the melodys synth in 3:26, it plays way too much and gets boring (from the start).
The bass change was too much, it sounds much different than the first half of the track. Then the melodies become more fullonish and not quite proggy as I expected. Kinda goaish.
You need to fill the track a bit more.
Well, more hours in front of the PC will due the job. Myself going to do that now!!!
good luck man
Misha
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newstate
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Posted : Oct 26, 2006 05:44
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thanks you all man for the comments, i really aprecciate it, and thats true more hours!! andddd more melodieess haahhah see yaa |
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