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PROGRESSIVE ELECTRO 132bpm
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etnarama
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Posted : Nov 29, 2006 13:14
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igor sorin
Invisible reality
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Posted : Nov 29, 2006 14:13
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well tell you the truth, im not sure what you tried to do here...
you have some good elements, but its sound little dry...
bottom line you have to work on it...
Good luck and im sure you will have a great track |
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etnarama
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Posted : Nov 29, 2006 20:39
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diskOtek
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Posted : Nov 30, 2006 20:40
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first remove the sample or at least use it less times cause u use it many many many times!
got some good bass and synth sounds,but if u want to make some decent electroish staff(n generally)thats not enough.you have to blend in many stuff in order to get a decent groove.
also the kick rolls dont fit AT ALL,work them otherway.
and yes please the sample 'turn up'.....please remove it! :]
hmm..its got some good moments but lacks a proper structure.
keep trying on it!
take care
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Nov 30, 2006 21:50
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etnarama
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Posted : Dec 1, 2006 12:25
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Dec 1, 2006 12:37
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some good ideas here man. disco said most of what i wanted to add. but one thing that its great is what you said : i tend not to follow styles or trends.
thats great! keep this spirit and go to the studio with more ideas!
Misha
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diskOtek
Entek
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Posted : Dec 1, 2006 20:48
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etnarama you have nice ideas here and there and thats because u let yourself free..thing is ok i have good ideas but i have to put them on the right order! 
also,you can be way out of psy and still dont use this sample,ofcourse its helful to have some samples but plz not this one!
kick rolls are the kick 8ths and 16ths you use like build ups..this is a personal view and i tend not to like the rolls let it be snare or kick ones
u have the spirit as surgeon says now get the most out of it! 
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etnarama
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Posted : Dec 2, 2006 17:48
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igor sorin
Invisible reality
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Posted : Dec 4, 2006 17:14
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by dry i mean that you can add more perc's and hithat...
Good Luck |
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etnarama
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Posted : Dec 5, 2006 19:42
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