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Progressive/Deep trance :-D
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Digital Love
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Posted : Feb 8, 2005 12:05
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ArseAssassin
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Posted : Feb 8, 2005 21:58
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Wow. This is pretty similar to a track I've been working on lately. I love this kinda stuff, it's so dreamy and light. Is this just a demo or what? It sounds kinda unfinished...
Well anyway, here's what I think:
I like the pad at beginning, but it really could use some stereo effects. Maybe you should try adding some reverb? Also, adding a static, subtle string sound could work well here. The melody that comes in works well and IMO it's one of the better elements in the track. I don't really dig the bass, it kinda lacks of punch. Needs a bit more effects here to make things interesting...
It's not a bad track, but needs bit more work. You should try using more delays and reverb to make it more atmospheric. |
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Digital Love
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Posted : Feb 9, 2005 09:23
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thanks for the comment.
its only af prewiev version. ive worked most of the sings you mentioned out allready.
but thanks anyway.
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M'rco
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Posted : Feb 9, 2005 13:51
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Hey Digi...
Good Work...!
I like your track - i agree with Arse that it sounds abit unfinished, but it dosn't meen you don't have good ideas, because you do, and that brings me to asking you, if i can do a rmx of this track...?
Cheers
Marco / Jinx
  Deep Danish Disco...!
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mafkaroo
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Posted : Feb 9, 2005 14:44
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Good!
Steer away from the full on - I like.
Obviously the production needs a lot of work.
Also work on the groove, try to get the sounds playing off eachother. |
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Xamanist
Xamanist
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Posted : Feb 9, 2005 17:31
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smooth progressive wave for the sunny morning, inspiring clean melodies, wandering voices.
seems empty from middle to the end, the rest is good sounding and full. waiting for the full one my friend, this is promising, well done!
boom boom
  Sérgio Xamanist
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Digital Love
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Posted : Feb 9, 2005 19:08
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thanks all!
allways love feedback.
i know i needs some work, and ive have been editing alot since ive posted this.
When it is finished im thinking of sending it to some labels. And if no one is interested you all get the final version.
And to Mrco: Ofcause you can ;-) |
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