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Posted : Oct 26, 2010 23:55:34
Hey guys,
I'm working on a remix of Aquafeel - Gloryland. Here's a demo of the track, i'm still working on it but i think it's getting there. Would love to get some feedback/criticism on it.
pr0fane
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Posted : Oct 28, 2010 21:04
You have most of the basics covered, and the melodies seem quite nice.
For my taste I think it sounds a bit too straightforward and sterile though - some of the percussion seems too static, and I think the track could use some more atmospheric elements to make it sound more pleasing to the ears and less "sharp". Just a tiny bit of reverb and delay can do a lot to some of your sweeps for instance and a bit of LP on some of your melodies and leads.
I hope my feedback didn't come across as being very negative, because I think you have a good good groove and melodies and you're on to something DJ pr0fane (Iboga Records) | Multiphase
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Posted : Oct 28, 2010 21:44
It's not negative at all, that's exactly the kind of feedback i was looking for. Percussion is the thing i wanted to focus on now that i have a good sketch of the track. I agree that it's a little static at the moment because i didn't really put too much emphasis on it yet.
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Posted : Oct 29, 2010 10:50
i +1 prOfanes comments.
i would add that the melody synth patch is very clean and not really "catchy" maybe some more work on a signature sound for that main melody would give the track something more to remember... maybe layer some sounds together and just add the delay to one of them or something like that?
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Posted : Oct 31, 2010 21:10
the light melodies are fine wine,1:40 till the second fade very nice, 3:33 after the third fade beautifull, this is that, 4:02 that light leed with grewing velocity should go on to get in touch with the story(sry for telling u what to do with u're music) after 4:30 everything is perfect to me ..nice one, play hard go pro
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Posted : Nov 1, 2010 03:57
nice.. loud and crisp. i like it a lot.
good work, honestly.
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