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prog trance (135 bpm)
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Abner Zeus
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Posted : Jun 18, 2008 07:07:40
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aQuaFeeLL
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 18, 2008 13:32
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Interesting tune... Cant talk about production coz im with simple headphones right now.
U have some beautiful synths on this track..nice atmospheres and good flow..
You can add some more synths so the track can have more story to tell.
But nice work well done.
Hope to hear something new from u soon.
All the best
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Abner Zeus
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Posted : Jun 18, 2008 19:19
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Thanks for the feedback dude!
I´ve been hearing your tracks too, massive basslines!
realy good!
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Jun 18, 2008 23:57
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Hi!
Can't talk about sound as well. But lets do that on the rest 
My points:
* Didnt like that you don't have an intro in the track. I personally can't things like that myself...
* I think it takes too much time to develop the track. You have almost nothing even when you are in the second minute of the track. I meant any synths' melodies and stuff like that.
* There is no law to put a small stop every 81632 bars like you do. Try to make different things with that.
* No melodies after the first & second breaks. Imo that is you weakest point in the track. I;m sure even more than the sound or other things.
No offence and goodluck!
Hope I helped,
Misha
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