Nomad Moon
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Posted : Apr 15, 2011 13:46:47
Good moaning everyone, been working on this one, needed some inputs, whatever u guys feel, bash awayyyy!!!
it starts kinda abrupt so be carefull with the volume level
killik
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Posted : Apr 15, 2011 16:02
very floaty, finish it
did u highpass the base? sounds like theres missing some bottom end
orange
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Posted : Apr 15, 2011 16:31
yeap sounds kinda dry... needs more bass!
needs more synths/fx/chords
the pad/atmos thing in the backround from 2:25 is boring.
Nomad Moon
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Posted : Apr 15, 2011 16:51
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On 2011-04-15 16:02, killik wrote:
very floaty, finish it
did u highpass the base? sounds like theres missing some bottom end
its highpassed but not much, it's missing?i'll what i can do, thanx
Architekt
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Posted : Apr 15, 2011 17:11
Nice one bro, good vibes, nicely balanced.
Some things that might help, but perhaps some of it is only opinion:
At 0:33, maybe come in here with a bit of percussion, a loop, so you are always building up the groove, even if its only quite quiet.
Also can chuck a bit more low end on the bass, and possibly fill the mix up a bit more with some different sounds?
Architekt
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Posted : Apr 15, 2011 17:12
Nice one bro, good vibes, nicely balanced.
Some things that might help, but perhaps some of it is only opinion:
At 0:33, maybe come in here with a bit of percussion, a loop, so you are always building up the groove, even if its only quite quiet.
Also can chuck a bit more low end on the bass, and possibly fill the mix up a bit more with some different sounds?
blueball
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 01:06
haven't heard it yet but it's a safe bet that your sounds and every sound really can and should use lots of dynamics, and by dynamics i mean more percussion, closed hats between open hats, weirdo patterns of weirdo percussions can make a music a lot more interesting, and in the leading area, lots of leads and lead swapping should be used to make the sound unpredictable and very catchy, peace
jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 06:54
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On 2011-04-16 01:06, blueball wrote:
haven't heard it yet but it's a safe bet that your sounds and every sound really can and should use lots of dynamics, and by dynamics i mean more percussion, closed hats between open hats, weirdo patterns of weirdo percussions can make a music a lot more interesting, and in the leading area, lots of leads and lead swapping should be used to make the sound unpredictable and very catchy, peace
and you can say that without listening to the trak? how?? im guessing looking at the image of the trak..
on topic.. i like the perc starting at 2.00 around.. and goes nicely after that.. keep working
