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Fredini
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 13, 2005 18:32
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This is my latest production not yet finished but a good preview from the beggining , hope to hear some constructive reviews from you guys , here goes the site: http:\\www.soundclick.com\bands\5\cookingnoise_music.htm The track is called Electronic Vision Thanks Fred ( Audio Groove) |
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nano-mechanic
Nano Mechanic
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Posted : Oct 14, 2005 01:08
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hey mate  the groove sounds promising but in my opinion one or two sounds dont really fit the groove and you could work a bit more in EQing the synths..more hi-hats are definetly needed and more percussions to make it more dynamic..
but of course it all depends of what you want to make on it, minimal or progressive..
hope i've helped 
keep it up
Cheers
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Fredini
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 14, 2005 05:33
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thanks nano for your review , im currently working on adding some percs and some more hihats rhythms , working also in the on the intro an in some sounds , in a few days ill present here the improved version, till then hope to hear some more reviews thanks Fred |
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Fredini
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 15, 2005 06:33
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Just uploaded an improved version of the track called electronic vision the site is the same http://www.soundclick.com\bands\5\cookingnoise_music.htm , hope to hear some reviews since they are very important for me and for the development of my track, since this is the real trance comunity and who better to criticise the tracks , thanks , Fred bringing the good vibes from Lisbon Portugal |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Oct 15, 2005 19:29
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hey man!!
here is my words!
i dont like the kick to woody! needs a more palstik bassy kick!
bass aint so bad but needs some beefing up!
some sounds are fine but need eq to fit better some other synths i dont like too dry!
vocals are fine!
needs some more drums and the breakdowns need more in reverse style wooshes!!
overall its nice chill and melodic with a laidback feel to it
keep it up and eq more!! good work
until next time dude!
orange
http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic |
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