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PRO-Gram & Chipe - Exit
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PRO-Gram
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Posted : May 15, 2015 15:13:30
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vipal
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Posted : May 15, 2015 17:16
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PRO-Gram
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Posted : May 19, 2015 11:36
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moleqlarsuperstructure
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Posted : May 19, 2015 14:04
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ok had two listens now in the track
first thing. it has nice structure and nice story. the track could be big if you take the production up to par.
the bass in my ears... its ok aslong its covered by the other sounds. but you could make it tighter. the low end fits the job. but you could give more presence. dont know how to say its kinda to nose-ie for my taste. maybe its just the cut off of the synth. or maybe boost equalisation around the 3khz area (attack)
same goes for the kick in the slappy area. make it more decent. give it that stone clap around 4-5khz
snare needs more bottom (try maxbass or rbass from waves).maybe also a tighter envelope. but source sound seems pretty nice.
the saw sound is indeed something hardcoretrance/techno like the pitch is very hard. but artistic choices shall be artistic choices. where would we end up when we just make the music as others it like.... 
 
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PRO-Gram
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Posted : May 19, 2015 17:30
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I agree with your comments on kick and bass, this was a collaboration with another artist and compared to my own tracks, the kick and bass were not as tight for sure, but i do need to rebalance one of the layers in the bassline (the sub part).
Thanks for taking time and checking out 
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