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Prince of Shmoo!
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apsilum
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Posted : Jul 18, 2002 03:06
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Hey there,
I recently uploaded something that I've been fiddling with for awhile. I did it for a laugh, tell me what you think.
"Prince of Shmoo"
www.mp3.com/apsilum
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apsilum
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Posted : Jul 21, 2002 14:47
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anyone interested?
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Jason (LyTe)
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Posted : Jul 21, 2002 20:33
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well, it's a very eclectic track, very weirdo beirdo style. u have Lots of work on sound. everything sounds clattered, unbalanced, wet and out of EQ. the structure is quite interesting, but sometimes it gets on your nerves, from trying to accomplish psychedelica. clean up your bassline, give it some more edge and less games. the percussion work is great. the kick is barely audiable...
all in all, a very acstract piece of work, but u need to work on your sounds pronto, boet.
J
 "We Do Not Allways See Things As They Are. We See Things As We Are" -Ancient Chinese Proverb
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apsilum
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Posted : Jul 21, 2002 21:40
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yeah, i hear ya about the clashing and stuff, it did wonders whilst tripping but thats about it. Basically, excuses aside, it was one of those not so serious tracks on the side. But maybe I'll remix it into something more progressive.
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ApsyDrop
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Posted : Jul 22, 2002 08:26
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Yeah... cool track.....
really weird... nice and abstract... just the way i like it!!!!
As has been said.. the sound does need a bit of work..... but besides that.. I'm digging it!
Creativity rules!
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Kaz
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Posted : Jul 23, 2002 12:18
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great groovy opening, some nice ideas, but definately needs a lot of work one the sound (especially EQ-wise). Great percussion work. Maybe take it to a more jazzy direction as well, it could totally rock.
Of course, Jason's comments still stand 
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apsilum
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Posted : Jul 23, 2002 22:50
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Thanx for your comments, greatly appreciated. Hmmm... could you perhaps give me some pointers EQ wise, like where I'm pushing the highs or lows too much, this would help. I think the reason for this is that I worked on this track quite absent-mindedly/eagerly so I didn't define it enough.
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