jekvan
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Posted : Feb 27, 2011 17:41:50
Lol,I remember the day when I wrote here,how I want to fuk the unfuckable with my truck,and kick the unkickable...Yea,this day I just want to get over with the first one without much suck.
Here is some preview after buildup,most of the sounds here is all I want to use,except some vocal and strange samples...Most of the leads I made,using flstudio built-in synths (offcourse,half of those are presets :| ),one FM lead,many granular synthesis leads.All of the plugins I used here are flstudio ones.
What bothers me now is my poor knowledge of mixing stuff...It's becoming like one big soup of sounds,and I originally wanted each sound cutting the mix,and be in the back (like in Cosma tracks,may he rest in peace).I can barely hear the bassline,which bothers me ....
Anyway,here it is,the first one,the beggining..
What ya thinka dudes?
panike
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Posted : Feb 27, 2011 17:51
some of the background sound are way to high.
but its a nice sound,finish it!
oh and congratulations for doing you first track
jekvan
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Posted : Feb 27, 2011 20:13
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On 2011-02-27 17:51, panike wrote:
some of the background sound are way to high.
but its a nice sound,finish it!
oh and congratulations for doing you first track
You mean,their volumes are high in the mix?
What sounds you talking about,can you give an example?
panike
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Posted : Feb 27, 2011 20:45
0:15;0:23... yes,its their volumes
killik
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Posted : Feb 27, 2011 21:15
i think he means the sound at 0:15 .
its really loud.
but a nice atmosphere!
jekvan
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Posted : Mar 2, 2011 01:16
Ok,I turned the volumes down in the mix,and actually I kinda redone that part,but it come out outfucking standing,not bad for a first timer!!Not to shabby at all,heh..
jekvan
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Posted : Mar 2, 2011 02:28
Ok,I've changed the bassline to fit the groove better,and this shit is smooooooking.
Fucking A.
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Mar 3, 2011 14:53
Can be much better with an new order of the bass kik , Realy hard flying up away with when you got this bass kik stop every second and not stream up .. if you know what i mean . Hh loops .. Where them ? (Could hear somthing far there at the backround ..) Give them more attention . Theres jumping sounds here and there need mix down .
Dont be afraid to get wild in your music , Bring more tools , Living and harmony in .
jekvan
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Posted : Mar 3, 2011 21:14
Have you heard the last one?Cause thats how it sounds now,not the first link.
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On 2011-03-03 14:53, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
Can be much better with an new order of the bass kik , Realy hard flying up away with when you got this bass kik stop every second and not stream up .. if you know what i mean
I think I do...But I got no idea how to do this,I still learn as I go,noobie in the house...
I just really wanted the more "deeper" kick,bassy type,like this
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. Hh loops .. Where them ? (Could hear somthing far there at the backround ..) Give them more attention . Theres jumping sounds here and there need mix down .
Mix down-getting their levels (like volume and such) better in the mix,or change the order?And I have closed hats in percussion,maybe it's not loud enough...
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Dont be afraid to get wild in your music , Bring more tools , Living and harmony in .
Absolutely no problem here,my brain has a warehouse of strange,with a closet of crazy .Just need to get around the technicalities...
jeeboomba
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Posted : Mar 4, 2011 12:03
if this your first trak, i can say you got ideas bro... just work more so you can understand the language of sound and start writing poems
Grevinsky
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Posted : Mar 6, 2011 17:26
Very good for first track.
I liked the change you made in the base since the other uploads
Takes time to develope structure and so, is a wide spectra and alot to learn.
But keep on going, sounding quite interesting already but 1 minute piece is too small too judge also
.Just need to get around the technicalities... 
