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-UIU-
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Posted : Sep 14, 2011 16:12:30
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In$ane el rato
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Posted : Sep 14, 2011 16:59
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hi! that's not bad in the composition but for me the eq is too high and your "tilililite"(^^) synth is a little bit repetitive same along the tunes... |
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phila
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Posted : Sep 14, 2011 21:58
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I like this very much!! |
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Larrikin
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Posted : Sep 15, 2011 01:56
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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht
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Posted : Sep 15, 2011 05:32
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very harsh... under the harshness are some nice sounds and ideas, but they are overshadowed by that loud and vulgar lead that is over most of the track....
humility wouldn't hurt either 
keep working though, not all is bad
The Way Back
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llama.exodus
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Posted : Sep 15, 2011 10:17
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Yea I agree with faxinadu, it's a bit rough.
Bassline progression is good and I enjoyed it, but I think you could work a bit on the overall mixing. Sometimes synth and fx are too over encumbering and in some parts high hats could use some variation. In my humble opinion.
peace!
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Redshift
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Posted : Sep 15, 2011 11:20
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I agree, the high lead is too repetitive and overpowering. It kills what is good in the track. And also, the arp in the intro is not in sync with the beat of the song. Maybe that is what you intended but it doesnt work for me. |
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knocz
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Posted : Sep 19, 2011 01:07
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Sorry, I'm not amazed.
You have some nice ideas there, but the overall choice in sounds in the structure aren't that good.. It could also be the mix which is screwing it up, try defining each section out and eq everything so it all fits together.
Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
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aciduss
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Sep 19, 2011 20:17
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ti tu ti tu ti tututit tut ritit tutut tititi tut |
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QXQ
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Posted : Sep 20, 2011 01:45
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I'm glad that, for my first post, I can tell you to:
Go eat a piece of Humble Pie.
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