Would like some feedback and constructive criticism on this track please. Production and arrangement wise. Enjoy and please feel free to pick apart and offer any (preferably more objective) suggestions.
Cheers.
knocz
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Posted : Sep 4, 2011 18:48
HI!
From 1:35 to the end of the track you play on a synth sound without modulating it much.. So that sound at the end sounds just like the beginning, and everything should be evolving to somewhere.. I'd say press record, hear the track over and automate that plugins' parameters in order to make it into something else..
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Thanks! That's not a bad idea. It does feel a bit inexpressive in that aspect.
Redshift
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Posted : Sep 5, 2011 13:07
Hey dude, I like this track. A few comments, though:
the vocals throughout the track seems a bit pointless. I dont think they add anything
I dont like the short buildup at around 3:21. A bit cheesy, I think.
I like the bass variation at around 3:40
Lots of different and interesting sounds throughout but it has the downside of making the track a bit rambling, if you know what I mean. I dont sense a central theme or motif that pulls it all together, and give the track an identity.
Just my opinion and like said, overall I like it. I am posting something here as well so feel free topull it apart .
Production and arrangement wise. Enjoy and please feel free to pick apart and offer any (preferably more objective) suggestions.
