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e-scape
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Mar 2, 2013 22:24:24
would appreciate critique




          
http://soundcloud.com/e-scape-2
Geom3
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Posted : Mar 2, 2013 23:07
i like it upto 2.00 then after that i feel like should be more variation..dunno tho as this may b what u purposely gone for,for this style? and i prefer that kinda of bassline to stay in one key not transposed if its in a higher key than usual, but that a taste thing..above all its well mixed although the bassline gets slightly masked when it gets bizzy with the mono input,.
above all just try not b predictable in arrangement of the following sections..

cheers

e-scape
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  351
Posted : Mar 2, 2013 23:27
Tnx for your time mate,it 's not 100% finished so It's going back to workshop one way or the other           
http://soundcloud.com/e-scape-2
aje
IsraTrance Full Member

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Posted : Mar 3, 2013 01:24
As I have told you before, you have a great sense of melody, and I really like your stuff that you post here. And I like the arrangement, unlike the poster above, it fits the genre. I think this is a very good track, something I would definitely enjoy dacing to on a sunny afternoon

That being said, theres something wrong in the mix I cant put my finger on. Something in the mids sounds resonant where it shouldnt. Maybe its cause Im kinda drunk (which I am . I guess its that riffy mid that drives the drack, its got too much resonance. But maybe Im just drunk;)

Anyways, well done!           Check out my album: http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/gay-satanic-hippie-tiefenrausch
e-scape
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics :  17
Posts :  351
Posted : Mar 3, 2013 02:12
Thank you my friend I switched monitors,got esi 08 and I'm geting used to them so the resonant sound you are talking about could be something I haven't heard on my previous shity monitors           
http://soundcloud.com/e-scape-2
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